VRMMO Dungeon
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
If you were just about to start playing the newest state of the art VRMMO game and was offered a to have a special start, playing an unknown but unique race. Would you choose to take it?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Lasse
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 12
- Views
- 1,164
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- DaftWullyRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This is a review of the first chapter, and largely a response to the first (negative) review. I'll update with a more complete review after chapter 10.
I have no idea why Beery is reviewing after a single chapter, but I think he is not doing the start of the story justice.
The quality of the grammar is quite good, and the story is readable. I found myself drawn in to the story within the first few paragraphs, and I am very curious how the story will continue.
The first chapter is in first person perspecitve, since the character creation of a dungeon core came as a complete surprise to the MC, little to nothing is given in detail other than what the MC discovers. That's fine, it's just the first chapter, after all. I look forward to seeing how the story will progress.