VR: Ascended Assassin

Self-Published

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Description

Venn was a nobody in life. Heaven Descent was everything he had.Having spent every waking moment playing the game as a game rat, he found himself back in time to the first time he started playing Heaven Descent after drowning himself with alcohol the day his sister died.With no knowledge of stock market nor sufficient capital, he is determined to rise to the top of the game this time to save his sister from her illness."Watch me! I shall take everything that belongs to me and more this time, even if it meant prying them from the clutches of Heaven!"

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Minimal_Effort

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYGAMELITMALE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
15
Views
4,589

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • JD GLASSCOCKRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    great concept and motivation for your story......keep it rolling and moving.......have faith in yourself and your vision and trip skip stepping down the roads it lays out....wish you nothing but beautiful blessings and success to your endeavor......i'll check back in a while to see where it's gone....keep doing you
    JD
  • Rowdy WeaselRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Enjoying how things are starting. Common but enjoyable premise, with what seems to be a hint toward the class struggle. Or if nothing else another take on the concept of corporate greed.
    The punctuation is fantastic, very few errors. (Like you gotta be looking for them personally.) But, grammatically it has occasional hang ups. Small pieces of speech that just seem awkward. Also, the paragraphing is a bit erratic.
    The primary content concern I have is the pacing. The author isn't screwing around, and gets into the plot quick. So quick that some things don't make sense. Or feel honestly rushed.
    Finally, I am not sure if it's rhetorical or if MC is breaking the "3rd wall" but, the way MC addresses the audience occasionally threw me off. "Imagine how..." Sure, likely rhetorical but the shift is kinda out of place.
    One other small detail is that some sentences are phrased as a short paragraph. But, that's something that can be addressed easily, unlike for example a plot hole.
    So far, all things considered, quite above average. Definitely looking forward to reading more.