Visceral

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Description

Officer Brent Barker is sent into Visceral to uncover the secret to why a VR game is so addicting that a city is collapsing in on itself. His orders are simple, infiltrate undercover and find evidence of foul play. What happens behind the curtain? Once he enters the game though he finds the experience too immersive and the world he left behind becomes a dream he once had. How will he uncover the truth when the game becomes all that is true? Discover through the eyes of a mad Orc and his incompetent tutorial Tootsie; a world so Visceral, that the real world can't call you home.

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Status
Hiatus
Author
Tayburn

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Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
25

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Chaos JesterRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story itself is fine. It's your typical vrmmo-esque litrpg with stakes that are questionable at best.
    The main character is a little boring, but it is clear that he will improve over time. The story is good.
    Weirdly enough, my complain is with the summary. It's vague, which normally would be great, except that it kind of rambles on. I honestly came into this expecting some sort of Battle Royale type situation, and almost didn't choose to read at all.
    There's great writing within. Don't be afraid to expand that to your summary as well.