Virtual Reality: Two Worlds Collapse (Slow Update)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

RinGeciD

• Chapter 3
  Oct 17, 2016
• Chapter 2
  Sep 27, 2016
• Chapter 1 (R-18)
  Sep 23, 2016
• Prologue (New)
  Sep 22, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• Amethyst DragunirRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Like the title says, I don\'t get whats going on at first, It made no sense, but as I got to the next few chapters the details were given bit by bit, which, though a bit corny, have a really good sense of empathy. Still not sure how the VR and other world connect but there;s still not that many chapters. I have high hopes for this fiction, cause frankly any fiction with Chaos........ (Spoiler Alert: Pandora)........ just makes stories really damn good, no idea why, probably cause there are usually unexpected turns, hence chaos. Either way Author-san, Keep it up, I\'m loving it so far.
• PrimeKnightRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  First my grammar and sentences are not good and below is what I wanted to do to some readers/reviewers
  Fist: as I can see au-sama doesn't have many times.... Or so what I thought.. Many reviewers said 'find some editor/PR and many more!' But do you it's easy? Doyou think au-sama have all the time to get does requirements that you wanted!?
  Second: reviewers comments said/write 'your grammar is not good!' MANY wrong 'THINGIES!' But do you think he is good at said language?
  Third: many opinions presented are solely for harems,horror,etc. But he's the author ma men! Different people with different thoughts! Everything will not be happen according to your thoughts! Authors might be interested in your way and adopt it to the chp BUT then some people got bored at it! Even thought you might have some help doesn't mean that he can do it all at once!
  That's all~! Some might want offended but it is just a mere thought of mine ~
  But still I like this novel~!
• VenxiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Much better then your previous version which was hard to read.  Not perfect but it’s a huge step so keep up the good work!
• UltrabenosaurusRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Edit
  Chapter 17 has disappeared since I wrote this. Things in my review may or may not exist any more, and may not be relevant when it reappears. Has the author decided to fix the MC? Is it something completely unrelated? We'll have to wait and see...
  tl;dr
  The story is great, the world is great, the other characters are great, spelling/grammar is at a level I can get immersed in and not notice mistakes without looking for them, but the MC is a mess. Not as in the person is a mess, but the author is incredibly inconsistent and appears to have no issue with undermining the main character to keep the plot moving.
  Basically, think of characters like Raku (Nisekoi) and Kyousuke (Oreimo) who seem to have strong opinions and are decent people, but then instantly wag their tails and obey orders like a good little doggy when the person they should hate most gets involved – see my comment on chapter 8 for a detailed rant on this.
  Long Version of Character Flaws (read at risk of spoilers)
  Given OP body by a godCan defeat woman who single-handedly slaughtered two entire armiesAlso kills a goddess while heavily injuredMC shows very strong willpower and desire to save his friendsNew body’s strength is “undefined”Has blessings from all the godsOne-hit KOed a friendly mortal god by accidentEasily beats most skilled sword fighter on first attemptSounds powerful, right? Then things go downhill. A lot.
  Daughter of said mortal god one-hit KOs MC with no effortIs treated like a plaything by said daughterDespite claiming to hate being treated as such, never does anything to defend herselfConstantly switches between assertive and badass in fights to being incapable of saying “no” to anyone not an actual enemy outside of fightsGets captured and imprisoned with basically no effortStuff about staying vigilant and waiting for “friends” (abusive daughter of mortal god) to rescue herMaid gives her larger portion of food occasionally, MC never doubts her motivesTreats maid like best friend beca