Virowraith

Self-Published

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Description

An ordinary woman on Earth dies after a resurgence in a pandemic that has killed many. She is revived in a world that she does not recognize along with nine other human beings. The problem is none of them remember anything from their past lives.

Now they are given the task of working for the corrupt corporation that has brought them there. What makes them so special? They were bred to be Virowraith pilots. Pilots of exoskeletons capable of extraordinary feats and destruction...to bring profit to those who use them and ruin to those that stand in there way.

What will this new life bring to this woman who remembers nothing? How will she oppose the corruption and tyranny of the corporations and the ruling bodies of this world?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
impsamurai

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREFEMALE LEADSCI-FIPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONSTRATEGY

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
2
Views
368

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • LyRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    In overall it's alright, the part where the story actually begins isn't uploaded yet so I can"t say much which is why I gave it 3 stars. Grammar there are pretty much no visible mistakes but there are better alternatives to catch your audience more effectively.
    Characters, tbh I'd rather not rate it for now since you only gave basic information and her thoughts which were written are also universal, pretty much anyone in that position would think that so right now there isn't any uniqueness.
    Style. Oh god. Objectively speaking it is perfectly correct. However for novels its flat, boring. The same pattern over and over. I this, I that, I this etc, tey did that, she did this. They did that then etc etc. It becomes boring to read. There are only very few sentences which don't follow that sequence. Change it up a bit more, at that moment they did that. When this happened I did that. And the sentences are also  a bit too broken. Most of them are all simple sentences with one subject, combine sentences more so it's fluid to read. Unless your explicitely trying to get that broken sentence effect thing it is really important to have some fluidness in the sentences