VINES: A Short Story

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Description

VINES: A Short Story is a little tale about a witch and her dealings with the aggrivations that plague her. Product of a writing challenge. Audiobook included!

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2021
Author
Writ

Tags

FANTASYMAGICFEMALE LEADCOMEDYDRAMASHORT STORYGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEAD

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Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
19
Views
1,981

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Community Reviews(6)

  • AsvilokaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a complete story in a narrative musical style. And accompanied by a complete audio narration! And, of course, vines. Vines vines, all the vines. Vines to grow and vines to go. Vines to ease the falling snow. Vines to rhyme and vines in time. Vines vines vines.
    Needless to say, this means it is perfect and cannot be criticised. Let there be vines!
  • DragonOfRochesterRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This short story is delightful. The humor is spot on. The audio version provided by the author is beautiful... Both versions ;) But most importantly, there are VINES. And the vines must grow.
    I suggest giving this short story a chance. And especially the audio version which is absolutely worth it.
  • InkBlotNarrativeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I found the writing easy to read and the humor enjoyable. I like antagonist-type characters who are just petty, so I enjoyed the witch's character. She reminds me of the witches you'd read about as a kid. Her song was fun, but a bit dark since it sounded like she only wanted petty revenge. I listened to the audio as well, and the narrator did a good job.
  • ArcaneSagaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    An easy to read and comfortable story! I think the ending was a bit too grim, perhaps, but narrativly speaking it was superb.
    I enjoyed the singing hum and the simple description. An easy going tale for children and adult alike. And a very cute touch with the cat as a character.
  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a short and simple witch story that is quick and easy to read. The magic of song might technically make her more of an evil druid or bard if you have a TTRPG background though it was nice to see something unique. The ending is a bit dark and sort of clashes with the vibe.
  • MK bk-201Royal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    as the title says i did not understand, the song and audio was nice but that was pretty much it, it was like they just mentioned a witch and a cauldron and the song started, i guess it would make more sense to me as a youtube video i think