Unwieldy

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Description

Maximilian, brought into a God's rat race to fill the numbers, was transported into another world. Nothing like the brilliant contestants that fill the other spots, Maximilian was an afterthought in the God's game. Confronted with the frustrating reality of being boiled down to three statistics, Maximilian needs to get his act together, or the worlds might very well suffer for it.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Sarius

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 582
Views: 305,726

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Community Reviews(10)

patoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
i thought it was going to be a typical isekai power fantasy but actually there are human characters and emotional interactions and the protagonist manages to exert influence on the world without being an overpowered asshole
very cool
my faith in max is such that even if he started collecting girls like rare gacha drops i could only admit that he deserves to get laid ten times a day and continue reading
it is pretty slow at the beginning though you spend like 50 chapters in the same town but it's not just a bog-standard training arc the main character gets shit done and becomes cool in the process
based author had health issues but came back from hiatus with 30 chapters and they still be writing even though this story dropped off trending before it had a chance to really get popular what a chad
you wont be disappointe
booitsjwuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
There still isn't too much out yet but I like what I've seen so far. First of all, making the progression system almost entirely achievement based is a really cool idea. It offsets what can be the greatest weakness of Litrpgs: progression becoming monotonous. Also, importantly for me, there are no annoying characters/sideplots thus far. That means no harems and no sycophants. I look forward to seeing where this story will go.
caburnRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm flabberghasted that this isn't more popular. This has as a main focus what leads to the downfall of so many other novels; talking and dialogue. I find it a super cool idea and I wish there were more chapters for me to read right now. If you're skeptical, don't be, just read the darn book.
hsteinvallRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is good stuff. So far a rather laid back system, which is nice. It might turn out all right, but I'm a bit worried by mentions of demon lords that this will shift into the tired trope of "transmigrated to fight the final boss". We'll see, I look forward to more chapters anyway.
Jangofet54Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Entertaining. I really like the main character Max and I'm enjoying the book so far keep it up.
ThaldorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm no scholar, and I'm certainly not an educated writer myself, but I haven't found anyone else who writes characters quite like Sarius. And the world-building and setting aren't far behind in quality.
Practically every interaction feels like the way an actual person would act and react in a given situation within the setting they live in. And I can't wrap my head around quite how hard that is to pull off, let alone repeatedly.
Grammar loses a point for occasional missteps here and there. Usually just a missing or added word. Despite there being a few per chapter, they're never to the point of changing the meaning of whole paragraphs and most are very easily fixed within the mind while reading.
I'm finally diving back in to the story and catching up, and even found myself flicking back several chapters just to enjoy them again and reaquaint myself with the world. As someone who has rarely, if ever, re-read a story, I found it just as gripping going back in, even knowing the story beats that were coming.
Sarius has a real knack for world-building and character growth, and I've enjoyed every chapter I've had the fortune to read.
JeaneanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Here we have, at least as far as I have read, an isekai where the MC doesn't get a cheat or is secretly a genius. rather he is the only one who isn't.
The story has a slow start, giving more importance to detailed worldbuilding and descriptions then throwing you right into the story, but that doesn't mean it's boring. Rather, you feel like you are reading a movie, with a clear picture in your mind for everything that happens.
There are some hints o the future plot of the story, but the author takes his time introducing it to us. Same with the characters.
Grammar is mostly good. There are some careless spelling mistakes, but it's in no way unreadable.
I'm definitely going to continue reading this!
KirbyisgreenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I liked it. Give it a shot. Perhaps you will like it too. It's a transmigration litrpg with a funny start. The novel doesn't treat things too seriously. The MC isn't a too-cool-for-school Jesus-mode pretty boy. He is kind of the exact opposite. I prefer these kinds of characters instead.
Good grammar and spelling.
Just needs more chapters.
heiv123Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The start good, feels really nice i real like this anime. It feeks good it have new chaoter i lije tyis much please nice.
TechmanRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Only 5 chapters so far, but a decent start. Transmigration litrpg that doesn't take itself too seriously. MC is self aware, but isn't OP or smarter than everyone else. Story isn't tragic or grimdark, but isn't LOLrandom either. Good grammar and spelling.
So far seems like a chill litrpg that's fun to hang out with. I gave it a follow.