Untalented

Self-Published

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Description

This is a beginner level xianxia that will explain cultivation over a series of books following Bran Ai's life as he rises to greater heights step by step.

No systems are here to save him, no special bloodline for him to fallback on.

There are reincarnators in the story, he is not one of them.

Holy sons and daughters gifted with incredible talent showcase their might, he is not one.

This story will follow the tried and true luck dao protagonist as he overcones obstacles, avoids death, grows as a person whether good or bad, and will learn to see the world in a different way.

This story will highlight the side characters who otherwise go ignored, not everyone has a good end.

Kiara is a girl with a simple goal, to learn witchcraft to turn her 'friend' into a frog. Has she underestimated the severity of her situation or will she successfully overcome adversity and become the first witch of her line.

Kao is a soul reborn, his past glory and talent no more he now stuggles with the most basic of cultivation aspects with a body ill suited for the task. He uses his past knowledge to push past expectations and hopes to one day regain his past body to get revenge on those who betrayed him.

Man-shik has only one goal, get strong and be cool. He left his family behind on the simple promise that he could do so at th final edge sect, whether he will achieve his goal or not is anyones guess.

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Hope ye enjoy this story, I cant promise satisfaction but I can promise decent writing. I really hope to be able to deliver a good story and mostly hope to be able to finish it, I'm sure many people know how hard it is to keep inspired to write at times and while I'll try my best everyone has limits.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Hc_Hc

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 26
Views: 17,446

Chapters(43 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall: The story has a promising premise, following a boy as he faces challenges and grows as a person in a mystical world. The cultivation aspect adds an interesting layer to the narrative.
Style: The writing style needs improvement in terms of conveying the characters' emotions and thoughts. Instead of relying on ellipses, the writer should use narration to show how the characters feel in different situations.
Story: The story follows a boy as he embarks on a journey in a new, magical world after passing tests. The concept of cultivation and spiritual roots adds depth to the plot, promising further development in future chapters.
Grammar: The grammar is generally correct, but there are areas where the text could be refined for better clarity and coherence.
Character: The characters, especially the protagonist, have potential for growth and development. The interactions and dynamics among the characters in the story could be further explored to enhance character depth.
Overall: The story has a promising premise, following a boy as he faces challenges and grows as a person in a mystical world. The cultivation aspect adds an interesting layer to the narrative.
Style: The writing style needs improvement in terms of conveying the characters' emotions and thoughts. Instead of relying on ellipses, the writer should use narration to show how the characters feel in different situations.
Story: The story follows a boy as he embarks on a journey in a new, magical world after passing tests. The concept of cultivation and spiritual roots adds depth to the plot, promising further development in future chapters.
Grammar: The grammar is generally correct, but there are areas where the text could be refined for better clarity and coherence.
Character: The characters, especially the protagonist, have potential for growth and development. The interactions and dynamics among the characters in the story could be further explored to enhance character depth.