Unrea

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Senizal Fi Chrora

• IX: Arena
  Sep 24, 2016
• VIII: A Financial Attempt
  Sep 17, 2016
• VII: Daybreak
  Sep 15, 2016
• VI: Night at an inn
  Sep 9, 2016
• V: His Own Circumstance
  Sep 7, 2016
• Interlude: Flojo's at Egdar
  Aug 26, 2016
• IV: Carriage Ride
  Aug 26, 2016
• III: Another Encounter
  Aug 24, 2016
• II: Sudden Encounter
  May 28, 2016
• I: Journey's Jumpstart
  May 22, 2016
• Nulla: Prologue
  May 20, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• FacepalmRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  So revised everything in accordance to Mr. author's request. Gonna make an unbiased review on this story because frankly it deserves it. He didn't want an unearned 5-star rating so mad proms for him.
  Before anything else though, just gonna repeat it but the stories Unique. Uses Pokemonsque catch em all style adventure using original Philippine-based monster of folklore-Diwata's and such.  Seriously that's such a fresh breeze of air from the generic elves, dwarfs and dragons littering Royal Road.
  First is the style-an action type setting with acceptable fighting scenes that I wish would go a little more in depth on the fighting. But all the same their's nothing wrong with it. Add in the fact that this stories reader interactive so it's quite good.
  Story- this is the one that attracted me to this story. One word: Pokemon. Second World: Adventure and this story got a follower in me. Really unique in how it using its assets.
  For example: the world regresses back into a feudal lord style leadership. He split  the Philippines into three sects the Christianos, Muslims and Encantado factions. I'm waiting for the story to progress enough because just from reading the prologue I could see the Mc fighting Yamato (Japan) and all the other new countries wanting to invade his country.
  On an unbiased note: The settings good with a lot of room to progress in. Plot points yet to be explored.
  Grammar: Nothing of note here. Quite good and I only saw like two or three forgettable errors. Not gonna ruining your immersion.
  Character: Not flesh out enough for me to really judge the MC but just from looking at him now. There's a lot of room to grow. I could see Fabio turning from the weakling he is to the Hero his country needs. A great hero's journey waiting to happen.
  In Conclusion: Read this story cuz while its not the best RR has to offer, it also isn't the worst.Far from the worst. I'll say top middle for now, till the story progresses more.
  It deserves more recognition that what its
• Birdie42Royal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I want to start out by saying that I love love love the storyline. It is unique, interesting and so much fun. At first, I wasn't quite sure what to make of this story, but as each chapter progressed, I became more and more invested.
  Before reading this, I didn't know much about the Philippines (nothing really), but as the story progressed, I fell in love with the rich culture this fantasy novel effortlessly conveyed. I love how in depth the world is and how the author just lets the world and characters unfold before you without going into huge amounts of boring detail.
  The main criticism is that it sometimes gets a little hard to follow to dialogue. I find myself itching to include a 'he said' or 'she said', especially when there is more than two people talking. The author is missing a huge opportunity to expand on the characters by including how they say things. Do they shout it? Do they chuckle and tuck their hair behind their ears? That is one of the reasons my character rating is a little lower. The dialogue itself goes a long way to convey their characterisation, but just a little bit of information between huge lengths of dialogue will enrich this already great story.
  I love where this story is heading and I defiantly saw improvement with the author's writing style as the story went on. I also love the interactive element in it. This story defiantly needs more followers. It will only grow as more people contribute.
• Z107288Royal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Style: 2.5/5
  Story: 3.5/5
  Grammar: 3/5
  Character rating: 4/5
  The standout portion of the characters was the dialogue. Several of the interactions were done well and came off as entertaining. The interactions between characters were interesting, yet feeling somewhat forced or unexplained at times. Personality of the characters shone through well primarily through dialogue. Only issue with the dialogue was that it was broken up at times that made it flow poorly, and it was sometimes difficult who was saying what and to whom they were talking too. To further improve the characterization, the author should work on adding more personality to their actions and demeanor, or emphasize such instances to compound off the good dialogue.
  Overall: 3.5/5
  An interesting story is laid out and good character interaction is included. The grammar is a wash; no significant problems or achievements. Style is the only category which drags this work down. Right now it comes off as somewhat bland and generic with little in its prose that distinguishes it from other, basic works. Other than that, the character dialogue does a good job of filling in the stylistic void, adding needed entertainment for the reader.