unpleasant supprise
Self-Published
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Description
again this is anouther short story sorry, if this is confusing
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- dawn wolf
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 201
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0This is a very dialogue driven piece that has what seems to be a clear unreliable narrator and it gets rather confusing. Description and spacing here need to bring the piece together and make it clear. It has promise, but the choppy dialogue and sparse context makes this confusing. Also, the typos in the title and blurb should be among the first things fixed.