Unnecessary Evil

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

(It's a slowburn. Contains 18+ scenes. There will be also smut later...)

Vladimir D. Svoboda. A hailed, but troubled genius from the planet Earth. The first person who made teleportation reality. The Rotshields, a mysterious family that ruled from the shadows, couldn't leave it just like that and wanted it for themselves. Needless to say, the operation went terribly wrong.

After that our hero, Vlad, finds himself in an extremely hostile metallic city, Koul'E. The capital of orcs, devilish wizards (quite literally) and enslaved goblins. Decadency, greed and brutality rules in their society; even gods steer clear from them.

Odds stacked against him, cancer slowly eating him from the inside, he will raze his way through the impossible situation and beings that vastly outclass him. However, he is not completely without friends and alone. An unlikely being decides to help him even though they went through a rocky start. They form a bond that will shake the whole city, and maybe the world.

Magic, technology and all the other esoteric powers are just a stretch of an arm away.

Editor, cover creator and overall great person:BlancChapters around 2.2K words long.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Dakie Salamander

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 32
Views: 11,593

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Community Reviews(3)

VMJaskierniaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A fun fantasy with stats, mixes up the real world as we know it with a bunch of fantasy, more so to the dark-er side of things- orbs and goblins and races that don't get as much screentime. I like the main character, and that the Slavic countries get a mention.
flashzoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Seems like a really cool story author is genuine and seems cool. Very few chapters right now and looking forward to more.
The story is about a generic genius boy with a good family for once shocking eh?
Anyway some people attack, boy's father dies...
They always die.
Some above god level dude being hunted gets found while holding this treasure seems like a system. genius boy and 53 other competent seeming enemies disappear into the void after getting a absorbed into the orb.
wanna know more?
read.
ps. If you like the story give it a 5 star the rating system for this site is out of whack so if you want to see this become popular or you really like a story even give it a 4.5 stars can hurt the story
WaryorWearyRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
From my noble face with my aristocratic nose, I say "this needs a proofreader and an editor". The 1st entry wasted all momentum on characters that immediately leave the story.
Grammar is bad, scene switching is rough, plot is complicated by being poorly described while spending extra time on describing tables and chairs, too many characters add to the jumble.
I gave it a 2 because I could parse the text.
good luck, author