All that occurred in this tale came about because the Gods Of Light overreached. Becoming complacent with easy victories they bit off more than they expected. The resulting chaos in the five worlds that they controlled brought great changes and opportunities.

NB: This story uses UK English spelling.

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HapeironRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Recommend the story, it really caught me. I also recommend reading the other stories of the author are equally fascinating, at least from my criterion. Even the story of "Empire in Crisis" that is currently in hiatus. It is a part of a set of stories that can be confusing at times but that when immersed in it gives you an incredible world construction.
While having multiple POV´s in a chapter can result in a difficult reading for some. It is really one of the qualities that I believe make the stories of Palanca_preta unique. :)
It should be noted that in the stories there are two universes that although they share several things in their composition, they are two different universes.
Leaving things simple: I recommend this story as a good read and a fascinating world that you can discover once you get to understand it.

ValentineNRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

The world building is incredible. Even days after binge reading this I can dream again.
Where are you ms/mr author? I need my fix ...

marmotteRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

It's been such a refreshing and good read. It's not a no-brain story. There is depth!
Hopefully, it's not your typical Dungeon core story, it is better!

HamsterDesTodesRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

Like palanca_preta's other story "The Misplaced Dungeon", this is not a typical dungeon core tale. It's more a kingdom builder where (one of) the main character happens to be a dungeon core.
There's not much time spent on description of caves, traps and monsters, nor on delving of said caves. These things exist and are mentioned, but most of the attention is on the wider world. The dungeon core is active outside of his domain and frequently interacting with humanity and the peopel of the wider universe.
He's not interested in raw power and killing - though he can if threatened - and spends most of his time ensuring his safety by other, more political means.
All in all a delightfull tale, though the typos, gramatical errors and missused homophones take it down from 5 to 4.5 stars.
What I fear is that this story is best read as a regular novel, not as a webnovel. There are a bunch of characters which may become a confusing mess if read with the typical long pauses between chapters.

readalotRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

This is a really good story. It needs a little proofreading done, but otherwise, it is fine. There are too many stories going on, to sum it up. Basically, some uppity gods decided to send an invasion to earth and got their arses nuked then the system moves in. That is where everything begins.

Sanity ClauseRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Horrible grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
Clever developement of the premise - intriguing characters - excellent world-building.
Author really should have had someone proofread/correct it before publishing.

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