Undying Heart [A Ghostly LitRPG]

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Description

Dominic Jones has lived a long life. Nearing his upper sixties, he expects nothing but to enjoy the fortune he accumulated and to continue doing what he loves – mainly helping others achieve their dreams.

And he had been on his way to another success when the Universal System decided to integrate Earth within its rules – changing the world, birthing monsters, and empowering both humans and the new races eager to carve a place of their own.

But all of that doesn’t matter, for Dominic Jones died soon after the first prompt appeared. And he was thefirst.

So an opportunity was granted to him. A possible place within the Universal System’s advent.

He just has to survive the Tutorial first.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Triarty

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 121
Views: 30,305

Chapters(22 total)

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NightGirlRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
First of all, I want to say that The cover was what attracted me first. Even if the cover is not what you judge the book by but when there are so many stories you know nothing about, the cover and name is what makes you curious to see what it's about. The cover with the picture of an old person intrigued me. I mean seriously! Why are most of the characters young and immature? Anyway, after reading the summary, I decided to read it.
I will not say anything about grammar, I'm not so good at it. But I like the style of the story. The Author is a talented person who knows how to fit different content he wants into the story without making it boring. How to write it in such a way that you feel the darkness of the story without being overwhelmed by it but still feel the weight of the characters' actions. hard thing to do I say. It is possible to work more on the characters, but it is not like I am an expert in that.
All in all, it's an amazing story that I'm sure even after it's ending I'll go back and read some parts of it over and over again. After all my motto is, "A good story is one that teaches you something new." and this story fulfills that very well.