Undead Evolution
Self-Published
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Description
A guy from earth is reincarnated into a fantasy sword and magic world
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Great Grim Reaper
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 1,699
Chapters(2 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- wolfisreadingRoyal Road★★ 2.0Like the review title says needs improvements because
The character is too crazy or happy go lucky
The chapter is too short and needs more details (don't use status as filler to make chapter longer)
Don't stay in 1st POV try using 3rd POV(point of view)
Try to introduce the character in a different way like adding the past events that leads to the current situation
try reading other works as references to improve your way of writing the plot, character, the flow of the story,etc
Spelling/Grammar a little
Try reading Fantasial Apocalypse, Legend of Randidly Ghosthound, Orphan Fox, Void Wolf (they're few of my many favs) and maybe other original novels or popular translated novels such as Warlock of the Magus World, Gourmet of Another World, etc.
I'm curious on what will happen next but pls be more detailed on what is happening and try to slow down a little on the movement of the plot