Uncovering The World!

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Description

I'm a novice when it comes to grammar but I hope you enjoy the adventures of Saladin who was a mining slave until his world changed and set him free. Watch him grow, and change from a lovable pervert to someone that everyone respects.Horrifying and unique creatures which can never be seen unless your literally messed up.You're wrong if you thought it's one of those typical harem adventure stories as it has lots of twists.Saladin would gain a ring which would be the main core of the story.By the way, if you think the romance is cliche and predictable, then guess again.The main plot would appear later in the chapters but if you stayed all the way, than you're going to have the time of you're life.Warning it contains tragic, mature and gore scenes

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Derejird

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 192
Views: 152,022

Chapters(51 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

AssmdxdRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
thank you
i like your novel
please increase Comedy parts
Donthebest22Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
First of all, the cover photo doesn't make sense putting someone in there and then the title doesn't make it a cover photo but anyway.
The style of the story is mediocre at best it has all the basic elements of a good book, but there is nothing unique here, of course it is simple at best and that is not bad, in fact it's good but you need something that other books don't have, use your imagination you have a whole new world to show us and that's what the title says Uncovering the World, for a more detailed analysis you have 1: an mc who wants to get stronger to protect others, check 2: a tragic event to motivate the mc. 3: mc had a bad upbringing 4: the females in your story need to have more a personality. Make your female leads strong and have a reason as to why they are strong you need to work on development of them.
Story: Now this story is also basic, but basic is good and bad at the same time you need to have something that going for your story that other writers don't have use your imagination more for crying out loud, your story is just plan and you can fix it by either continuing and developing the setting more the places they have been and where they are going to next make it so i can see it as i am reading i got lost half of the time you have semi good descriptions, but leave some parts out let the reader imagine for himself.
Grammar: grammar is ok nothing really to talk about it's the internet as long as the read can read it and understand it clearly then i'm ok with it nothing to report here
Characters: the only one i remember is the mc and the first and second girl, there was not enough development on the first but more on the second whats up with that oh and the third one is coming back to me she was blind and thats all i know, you need to make sure you side characters or you harem get alot of development as well it will do you and the reader no good if they can't remember who your characters are all you need to do is develop them more and make them
SudarFanboyRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The story is pretty good in my perspective
You can clearly see how much the author's skill improves when you compare to chapter 1
Though you need to fix some things in the story for example the Power Up system should be simplified and more organised because the readers can't really get a feel for how strong the characters are
Other then that I like it ; the references are awesome hope you keep up the good work
CruxioRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story seem bland. It introduces a lot of mystery or drama or something akin to that but sadly nothing spectacular.
I tried to enjoy it. But the characters are not loveable. The POV change is unnerving and most of the time only serves as a chapter extension. Saladin tried to be funny, but it always, always fail. Maybe you are restricted in your writing or just dont have that much inspiration and it reflects in the story. Yes the romance is cliche i tried going over it a dozen times and still, it is cliche.
More like a response than a constructive criticism, but the story is really, not likeable.