Ultimate Rooster Evolution

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Description

Ryan Alfa Edison lived a good life until a planet-sized hand destroyed Earth at his wedding and transferred earthlings to another world. Some people were reborn, some people had their souls attached to dead bodies, and some people simply teleported to this world.

Ryan had stinky-like gutter luck. When he woke up, he found himself in the body of a jungle rooster. Alone in this world, he has to adapt, get moremagical abilities,andevolveinto stronger monster forms.

Later in his journey, Ryan realized being alone in another world withmagicandmagical creatureswas dangerous, but luckily, he had the ability to raise undead monsters. He would build a strong army of undead monsters in order to survive and find out the reason for his existence in another world.

This is a journey of a necromancer rooster.

Book one is available for free on KU

https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B09Y2P2TJX?maas=&ref=

This story will be published on Amazon Kindle Direct Publishing under author name Derek Vayne

Information

Status
Ongoing
Year
2021
Author
Chadken

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Rating
3.8/ 5.0
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474
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32,639

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • DeathSalmonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Fun story, just getting started so my review might change later but, there is lots of room for character and world development. it's a great start to the story so far. At first I thought it would be like another chicken cultivator book on this site but he took the story in an entirely different driection.
  • KaminRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a pretty fun web novel. Taking a rooster and making him into this super powerful necromancer? Thats so sick. Although the grammer can be a bit rough, this novel is just one of those really fun reads. I definitely feel that there is a lot of potential here and I can't wait! I totally recommend checking it out!
  • tildeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Overview:
    The story is setting up to be a progression fantasy in an interesting world. The author is good at slowing revealing elements of the world rather than just info dumping them. One might expect the protagonist to be an underdog because of the starting place of "rooster" but that's not really the case. The MC powers up quickly and this is not a progression fantasy where the MC has a lot of struggles early on.
    Constructive Criticisms:
    The most recent chapter has more spelling mistakes than average. I'm not sure if that's a sign of quality change or merely the author's process where they revise chapters soon after release.
    We've met a small number of characters, but they haven't distinguished themselves much yet beyond a single attribute. I'm hoping the characters (including the MC) gain more personality as we go on.
  • ZsellRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Due to this story being so new, this won't be an in depth review. However, this story has a great start so far, so I want to encourage the author to keep up the quality!
    OVERVIEW
    I enjoy monster evolution LITRPG quite a bit, so I was very excited to find this novel. It has an interesting premise that I haven't seen before, with the MC starting as a chicken, as well as a somewhat unique System. Rather than gaining power through grinding skills or gaining preset monster skills, people in this world gain power by incorporating the monster cores of defeated enemies. This provides a vast array of potential ability combinations, which is great, but also can easily create an overpowered character.
    WRITING
    The writing is excellent so far. No typos, easy to read, and fast paced without feeling rushed. The author is doing a good job moderating his exposition dumps. It is clear they want to drop info all at once, but have been using "memory dumps" to the character instead of long dialogue. Overall, no issues at all with grammar or writing style.
    CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
    I just want to note a few points I think the author should be aware of. None of these are issues at the moment, but we are early in the story and I want to throw them out there. I won't expand too much on these.
    -MC is gaining OP abilities from the weakest mobs.
    -MC in the only one using abilities, why haven't we seen the dark rats using any of the abilities MC knows they have?
    -If every gained ability requires killing another being, how would life proliferate? Every being would be hunted down by more powerful beings, even if they are immensely weak, because core strengths apparently don't matter when gaining abilities.
    Anyways, keep it up author! I like what you are doing so far, and I'll definitely keep following this story! Can't wait to see what chicken boi does next!
  • mortsllafRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Ok this is a fairly good book to read, the story is simple so far and no major plot holes as far as I can see. I would read it if I where you.
    style:4/5
    It is a popcorn novel, a simple but easy to understand structure. Is enjoyable.
    story:4/5
    As I said before, not much now, but it seems there is something interesting going on.
    grammer:3.75/5
    Only minor mistakes, no real problems. Could be improved.
    charecters:4/5
    Simple motivations, but understandable. No problems.
    Overall, a fun novel to read. Not the best, but definitely good. I know that people only really read below 4 star novels, so added an extra quarter star. Flows good so an extra half. I only have less then 100, no advanced for me.
  • LucyAzomoniaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I will be honest. I did not think much of this book when I first found it but surprisingly it has been pretty good. I won't lie and say that there are no problems with the book but so far there is barely any I can see or think of, the only thing I find that can be improved with the story is that sometimes throughout the chapters the MC speech pattern changes and it kind of kicks you out of the marathon grove that you get into when reading a good book.
  • The_Eternal_PalaceRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I don't think English is the Author's first language. Because the grammar in this is terrible. Misspelled words, clunky dialogue. Anyone who is writing in a foreign language deserves more leeway.
    As for the story itself... It follows the usual trends.
    Fight monsters, get stronger, level up. Befriend the strongest being in the world. Get broken powers.
    It follows the usual trends. Including the tropes that I personally don't enjoy. But that doesn't mean you won't.
  • WellfinderRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Interesting idea for a character, but the execution is lacking. The writting feels choppy and doesn't flow well. Feels like a very rough first draft where ideas are just thrown onto paper. Not sure why so many authors have recommended it. Will continue to read in hopes that the writing improves but may drop at anytime.
  • TechnicallySentientRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The writing style is disjointed and has poor flow and pacing. The concept is okay though nothing wildly new - hard to tell if the writer is just trying to be as over the top as possible with the names they choose for things but they become fairly cringey fairly quickly..
  • RasualRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Enjoyable only if you don't mind meh wording. That isnt entirely bad but the story just kind of lacks. The MC is becoming way to OP way to fast and it simply doesnt seem all that tense? The system seems interesting and alot of the abilities are just super cringe. Might get better hopefully it will because i am a sucker for undead type novels. Good luck Author