Ultimate Cultivation Master
Self-Published
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Description
Be the master of the world learn all martial skill make beauties fall for him it's new moto for yan chan after crossing world . An eatrh boy has transferred to martial world then make decision to be a legendary master of this world. Follow the story of yan chan as he adventure through this new world.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- Pallab
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 0.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 990
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- MrHrulginRoyal Road★ 0.5Each chapter is a single run-on paragraph.
- UlbertRoyal Road★ 0.5Is this satirical? Because if so, please declare it as such.
This review is based on what I can rate. And it needs to be rated asap.
If this is not satirical like "Harem Trash" for example, then let me Say this:
There is no style to rate. The are no paragraphs. It feels like I've just read three chapter-long sentences.
The styleislikethiswhereIcrameverythingtogetheruntilitisasunintelliglenndjdkeb.
Moving on to the Story. I assume this is going to be of the Xianxia or Wuxia or something genre. Not a big fan of it, but cultivation stories can be good imo. And as the author has at least a semblance of knowledge about the most stereotypical tropes, I'll give him one star for it.
Grammar. Ehem. GRAMMAR... EHEM. GRRRAAMMMMAAAA...
I seriously don't know what to tell you. The author has no knowledge, regarding the english language. This isn't even something I want to go into too deeply. Just read the first three chapters.
I truly think that this is satire. Call me an ass, but find them to be so bad, that they're good.
Character score: Yan-chan or yan chan as he is called, is no character.
He might as well be a handkerchief.
I actually didn't pick up on what exactly happened to him, as I am no chess or puzzle master and my knowledge of five dimensional underwater upside down reverse draw 4+ uno reverse card no u chess is rather limited.
Some military dude happens to get into some Isekai shenanigans and stuff happens. Or maybe not. Who knows, really?
My conclusion:
If this is satire: This will be enjoyable for about 6 chapters until the shock wears off and our eyes will start to collectively bleed.
If this is an honest attempt at writing something serious... then:
1. Learn english. Excessively. Take a course or something. Or a camp. Like a Jesus camp for english learners.
2. Once you got grammar and language skills polished, Learn how to use paragraphs and layouts. And maybe some other features like blue boxes and the most important of all of them: THE SPACEBAR.
3. Go on yout