Two Brothers Taking Care of A Teenage Girl
Self-Published
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Description
What would you do when you found a young girl full of bruises in front of your house?
That is the question Tam and San had to face on a seemingly normal day when they found a young girl with torn clothes and bruises all over her body.
What will happen when they decide to keep her? What will their day-to-day life change as a family of three?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Shyerin
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Views
- 490
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- MacFish369Royal Road★★★ 3.0The plot is definately interesting, but execution could have included more of a build up and more of the narritvie of the main characters, although adds to fast choatic tempo, which creates a good effect.
Although the execution of the later part in the first chapter is decent in the way it creates suspense, but other than that the introduction and middle need slight impovment although I understand the (editor's) notes with not wanting to do so.