Twisted Fate

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Description

Althrá is a world suffering from an invasion from the lower planes has turned to many different forms of magic from gathering beings from other worlds to bolster their own to turning to the same powers that caused the invasion. Twisted Fate follows the story of Twisting Fate's Adrian Ravnos in his adventures through this world as he learns who he is along with several other characters.This story is a sequel to Twisting Fate though only its protagonist continues onto this story. There are multiple different systems of magic used within the story and sometimes convoluted reasons for why things unfold as they do.For those who read Twisting Fate, Twisted Fate is a continuation of Adrian’s story but the actions of me-but-not-me have significantly changed many things, there are many differences between the Althrá of Twisting Fate and this story's.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
DarkFire

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYADVENTURESUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
191
Views
151,615

Chapters(82 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • TweedledeemeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    compared to the first book, this one is all over the place. You are constantly jumping from character to character. Some may like this style of writing but I find it annoying.
    I will still continue reading hoping that events will consolidate, because it is at heart a good story.
  • Liamrodhudson331Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The begining picks up way too slow. The constant change of POV is annoying. I don'teven care about the supposed MC, why should I care about the other characters? So far, there hasn't been any emtional attachement, I barely cared when that Thomas dude died.
    MC and coo. are supposed to be special or something but it just seems to me that random runts on the street are stronger than them. Seriously, why bother calling beings from another world when the residents of your world are so much stronger?
    The plot is all over the place. Demons, Elves, Werewolves and Althaens. In the end, who is the main antagonist. You're making the most basic mistake, introducing too many to-be antagonists when the first one hasn't been resolved.
    And the grammar... Sure, it's better than your first story but there are still horrendously-written sentences, which really break the flow of the story.
    Now I'd have given it a higher score, probably 3.5 but I don't feel like giving high score so 3.0 it is.