A human soul is cast into a new, foreign world. Now inhabiting the body of Rankar, a young orc, he will try make friendships, lead his tribe to greatness, and, most importantly, kill a goblin or two along the way. Alright, maybe a few more than that.

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Jonathan BRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

-Biggest note for the first chapter is that I find it hard to believe this
person's first assumption about being in this new world is that he had died
and was reincarnated. I'd spend more time building up to that reveal, to make
this guys deductive reasoning feel more realistic and logical.
-I did however like that he was literally born into a new world and that his
mother seemed to have died in the process. That's sad, but it's interesting and
could have major ramifications in the story.
-I'd be interested to know more about this MC and what they were like before
being reincarnated. What were their likes and interests, how did they die? I'm
a little confused, because this guy just woke up in a new world and he kinda
just shrugs it off and seems to immediately adapt to the situation, calling
this random orc dad, and calling orcish culture, our culture.
-I do really like how Raknar doesn't actually speak Orcish, so he'll have to
learn like a real child. That's very cool.
Thanks for letting me read your story, I have a few notes, let me know if you have any questions.
-I know next to nothing about Raknar, but he's a good narrator. You do a
good job describing the world and his observations of it. Definitely helped
to keep me invested.
-I like this rivalry you've set up between Raknar and Mok, it's clever because
it allows us the reader to see what a normal orc child is like compared to
our protagonist.
Keep up the great work!

Locnav LivocRoyal Road

★ 0.5

i don't expect anybody to be a perfect author, or to plug any and all plot holes. but in this case it absolutely horendous. without going into specifics, let me make an analogy: if you are cold you try to cover yourself, let's say with a blanket. maybe you don't have a blanket right at this moment, but you would defiinitely prioritize the aquisition of said blanket. in this case the protagonist and those close to him just don't. i don't know it it's becuse they don't care or because they have limited inteligence. the author doesn't explain. and the protagonist is supposed to come from modern day earth. if his new people are primitive maybe he can bring a few elements to help. but no. he seems to at the same level if not lower.
semi-spoilers ahead:
1. the orcs have some enemies; they ocasionaly have to fight said enemy; they also have the ability to produce armor. nothing fancy but the enemy is at the same technological level as them so it's not like going with a knife to a gun fight. they don't even tie some pieces of wood together as a shield. they hunt animals and they butcher them. but what do they do with the skins and furs? they use them as doors. not as armor... as doors....
2. the protagonist is supposed to be isakaied from modern day earth. he doesn't tell the tribe about shields or armor or such things.
3. a very important person in the tribe dies. his only succesor is a very young girl. that's it. nobody seems to care too much.
4. for orcs they seem to be very touchy-feely and sentimental.

Tusked Rebirth - an Isekai Fantasy

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