Tsukishi
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Warning: This story contains sexual content, and is mainly related to dark subject like manipulation and maybe incest and maybe even sex with loli. This story should only be read by ADULT. The minimal age for the heroines is 17 years old!Take Yuu, a high school student died after confessing his love and end up in a new body in another world.However, it seems that he obtained a certain ability to summon cards with diverse effect able to manipulate the peoples around him. Watch how he will live using this ability.My main language isn't English, so please point out my mistakes if you see some. Thanks.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- Tsuru
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 445
- Views
- 110,292
Chapters(10 total)
- Chapter 9: To act or not to act?Apr 4, 2016
- Chapter 8: Only retrieving clothesMar 20, 2016
- Chapter 7: The Bloody Dog and The Red WomanMar 6, 2016
- Chapter 6: Working at the Guild?Mar 6, 2016
- Chapter 5: Roaming in the CityFeb 28, 2016
- Chapter 4: Toward the CityFeb 20, 2016
- Chapter 3: A feast for breakfastFeb 18, 2016
- Chapter 2: The Love RemoteFeb 18, 2016
- Chapter 1: Kishi CardsFeb 16, 2016
- Prologue: Where am I?Feb 15, 2016
Reviews
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Community Reviews(5)
- NinjinnationRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Love it! I really like the story so far and everything about it hope you keep it going. I don't have to many suggestions yet because your not to far in yet.
And one last thing is the main character still growing up or is he going to stay like a scrawny weak kid forever. - ShikiRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It started with a template death. Tansported on a different world with a unusual ability… with little twist on events
5/5 for now(ch 6) it may change later
Definitely worth to read!
- Seemingly Yandere Heroine... check
- Small Animal-ish male MC(almost genben due to appearance)... check
- Super OP Heroine... check
- And many more in store~~
So what more do you want? - jordanvnRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The MC is not dense and is actually aware of the feelings of his lover(s). I hate dense MC so much because they feel retarded and unrealistic like you would have to be a complete dumbas* in order to not understand that a girls loves you in many of those dense MC situation,so the fact that the MC is aware it nice (This might also have to do with the fact that he manipulates their feelings...)
- talldudeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I'll give this 5 stars because this deserves more recognition. I like the story so far it's very original, summon cards is a concept I haven't seen done before in a FF.
There are A LOT of grammar mistakes but strangely it didn't affect my reading experience too much. I think down the line you should find someone to proof-read your chapters.
So far I like the characters a lot especially Kaiyu, it was a good idea to have segments from her perspective I really liked those. I hope that you will continue to do that with other harem members.
Really looking forward to more romance scenes.
Keep up the good work! - Lock95Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5SPOILERS
Great story i mean a hidden gem , but the only flaw i see it s with the love controler and the other skills wich respond to the mc, why?
-i try 2 put myslef in the character s shoes (mc) so if i do that , i get the idea that who ever i use the love controler is a doll , i mean it s not real feeling it s fabricated , and the same goes with the other skills/cards wich changes the person..... hell even npc s in other story ha s feelings , but not forced/changed by some forced factor.
-i see you have potential , even without those skills, i can easily see you in top, but i think some people are like me or same idea ... just immagine u love someone and u know it s all beacause of a skill or something created , can u really be happy knowing that it s "false"?
- if not for that i would 5/5
Sugestions:
-make a feature/skill/card where he can change those skill for a random one
-make him confess to her that he used those skills on her and make him leave , like he leaves cause he feels guilty , and make him start some little adveture as that and make something cliche (like him saving her then leaving again(hopefuly some poison so that she is does not apper "weak" since i saw u were trying 2 make her look strong ) then him leaveing again , dunno ure choice what u do ...
I see the story being great even without those , i hope u still resolve the girl with 100 love value since even if something does happen, in my eyes would be something like a robot with a guy so.....
Those who support this idea plese vote so that the author will see and probably do something.
Without that flaw , i consider this a hidden gem and a great work , thanks.
And sorry for any grammar mistakes , this is actulay the first review i did i think in moths of reading