True Monsters

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Description

Many strings of fate come together

The hunters have existed in some form as long as the vampires. The current state of the order is a reflection of the current state of the vampire’s we face. A grim reflection brought about by needs. This land is as it always is in crisis When men have to be more monstrous than the beasts who is the true monster.

When the kingdoms could no longer afford a standing army and the guilds started to encroach on the nobility's power the free mercenary companies began who is better a man who fights for coin or a monster that fights for blood.

The mages submitted to the authority of the king and accepted his royal charter-ship with all that it entailed and so the inquisition passed them over for now.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2019
Author
Martin2300

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYDRAMASUPERNATURALHORRORMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.7/ 5.0
Followers
60
Views
70,427

Chapters(89 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • limwanyaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It looks promising. It's hard these days finding a properly written litrpg novel so.. Bookmarked and rated
  • bob the bandit wellsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The author seems to have gone to the effort of reformatting their first 5 chapters. They seem to have improved a bit. It seems that this author is using this as a practice to get his ideas out. The characters are a bit bland. If the author continues we may get some character development on generic mage archer fighter and homebrew hybrid guy.
  • darkshadow2611Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    This review was made in part to counteract the random 5 star review aswell as to state that thier are issues with this story. this review was written as of chapter 5.  Date: 06/01/2019 DD/MM/YY
    grammar:
    its poor, it seems like the author got an idea for a story and started to write it down without bothering to proof read thier story or it could be possible that english isn't thier first language, a large amount of the issues is sudden changes in topic or descriptions or just no commas or full stops seperating seperate clauses within the text, this causes some serious confusion when reading and i've had to reread through a line of text 3-4 times on occasian to try and make out what the sentence is meant to say, the story is presented in large slabs of text that are sperated by rules which aren't obvious to me. the poor grammar really hurts the description of the world, which, despite the issues does sound alright but i just can't get a good picture of the world in my head.
    Everything else:
    unfortunately, the poor grammar has ruined most of the other portions of the story, as, if you can't convey the story properly then no matter how good the story might be you can't call it a good story.
    this is my personal opinion, if you enjoy the story despite the grammatical issues then continue reading. my advice to the author would be to read over what he's written and edit it heavily, cause it seems like you haven't read over it at all, if english isn't your first language then you're forgiven slightly but you still need to edit your work.
    thank you for reading