True Daughter of Storm

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

sahara airen

• Chapter 0204
  Dec 10, 2019
• Chapter 0203
  Dec 10, 2019
• Chapter 0202
  Dec 10, 2019
• Chapter 201
  Nov 26, 2019
• Chapter 0200
  Nov 21, 2019
• Chapter 0199
  Nov 19, 2019
• Chapter 0198
  Nov 14, 2019
• Chapter 0197
  Nov 12, 2019
• Chapter 0196
  Nov 8, 2019
• Chapter 0195
  Nov 7, 2019
• Chapter 0194
  Nov 5, 2019
• Chapter 0193
  Nov 1, 2019
• Chapter 0192
  Oct 31, 2019
• Chapter 0191
  Oct 29, 2019
• Chapter 0190
  Oct 26, 2019
• Chapter 0189
  Oct 26, 2019
• Chapter 0188
  Oct 24, 2019
• Chapter 0187
  Oct 22, 2019
• Chapter 186
  Oct 17, 2019
• Chapter 0185
  Oct 15, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(8)

• FenraeDraconisRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The first part of the story is a bit hard to read and jumpy, but if you can hang on till the chapters in the 80-90 range it starts to smooth out and find it's groove. I am interested in seeing how this will go. There is still room for improvement such as scene transition, but there is good progress from where it was during the early chapters.
  There are some people disparaging the character, she does need some smoothing out and more explaining/adding in details/smoothing out with the earlier chapters. There needs to be a bit more of mesh between the personalities shifting. She IS a greedy merchant, who is a bit cold blooded, and careful planner.
• MnrRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  My only problem with the story is the characters really, I don’t really mind anything else
  I really want the author to put more thought in tempest character because they seem to be unsure of how her personality should be that it’s making the story a bit messy
  anyway like the story and I hope the hiatus will end soon can’t wait for more chapters 😁😁
• FancifulEightRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Great core character
  Great core progression
  Bogged down by extensive exposition/info dumps
  It's quite sad as I don't believe the info dumps were even necessary.
  I can't recall a single one that felt plot related.
  I would gladly come back and read it once it has been edited.
• AmiranthaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I like the premise of the story. I tried to endure. But after reading 18 Chapters its the end for me here.
  Characters dont feel too good. Even the main character feels shallow up to this point at least.
  And all of that i could live with in a story on Royalroad.
  But the poor Grammar breaks the story for me.
  Instead of getting better it seem that there are more and more mistakes the further on I read.
  Now, english is not my native language either, but finding errors every second sentence is just too much.
  Get a proofreader, take more time with each chapter, or something.
  As it is I can not recommend this story to anybody.
• EiferRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  This is one of those stories where the characters can't have a 5 line conversation without a chapter long explanation of whatever obscure background information that is irrelevant to the overall story gets shoved down the readers throat.
  I generally don't mind bad grammar and sentence construction, but the story have to make sense to make up for it. This one.. doesn't. In 2 chapters you get drowned in people having existential crisis out of nowhere.
• endoriaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I cannot judge the story, since I did not make it very far into it.
  The plot seems interesting (as do most reincaranation stories).
  The huge downside is the bad writing. The first two sentences of chapter one already contain at least 5 grammar errors, 2 spelling mistakes and the punctuation is pretty much non existent.
  This story COULD be really good, if it gets edited and proof read.
  @Author: Please do not take my review too badly. At least you took the time to write, which is more than most people do. :)
• dumniezoRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  The story starts out interesting but it become very hard to read very quickly.
  The scenes in the story seem to take place out of order, like a captain yelling at the crew that they are leaving for a mission and afterwards introducing themselves to the protagonist and attempting to add them to the crew. This was clearly supposed to happen the other way around.
  The grammar makes the story hard to read and at chapter 14 I had to stop as it was bothering me too much. Maybe give a re-read to the story before publishing or get an editor, it would elevate the story.
  Story is interesting and while the character seems a bit OP it is an intersting premise for them to roam about in.
  Speaking of the character she seems very weird and quite possibly insane, but I am not sure if I simply get that because of the grammar and the out of order sequences.
  Honestly once it is edited I would actually recommand the story, as it seems interesting and quite fun, until then not really as it would just annoy you.
  Sorry about my grammar, but alas I am not a writer.
• KeifruRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  There are ideas I like and some elements of potential. But.
  Your character is all over the place. I dont know what I'm supposed to think. I can't really even begin to untangle this knot. You need a firmer grasp of the MC- experiences, motivations, and personality. She's all over the place- for awhile the careful planner, the next the naive opportunistic merchant, the next a calculated (typical wuxia) cold-blooded schemer. Just blaming it all on 'lol crazy' is a lazy cop-out to fleshing out your character. As-is, she's whatever the plot demands her to be. Does Tempest have any agency? She goes from one situation to another as the plot demands and stuff just...occurs. It seems the longer things go on, the less smart she is. Its mentioned she was 22ish years old but acts as if she is a child. Despite having a way to get information and a previously-indicated desire to learn before acting.
  I'm not touching the karma stuff. Just...if you info dump some kind of element like that, do it once or work it into the story organically. Don't constantly 'surprising revelation/subversion' every-other chapter.