Triple Orb Academy

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Description

In the parallel world of Zeffernon, magic is equivalent to science. Magic is explored and used everyday, and it is something that cannot be eliminated. Since magic is drawn from the blood, it can never disappear from the world.

This story is also posted on fictionpress.com and vicslab.com.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Strovist

Tags

FANTASYMAGIC

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
62
Views
36,570

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • BiakoRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I personaly have read the story of Strovist on another website and found it to be amazingly good. One more thing although they may apear to be but few chapters but every one of them is gigantic i mean about 20Kto30K words per chapter so it is very interesting and long
    The flow of the story as you all will see is magnificently fluent and mezmerising . the character's interaction with each other i impecable and every single one of them is fleshed out and has a purpose of its own.
    the writer's tallent has left me stunned.
    the story is fluent although with a bit of ehavy chunks of information from time to time the writer is constantly reminding the reader with this said information that you won't feel it at all.
    the amount of conversation and the simplisity of it betxeen the characters is enough to hook you and make you unable to stop reading.
    the writer has a lot of content written already so you wont get bored anytime soon
    the grammar is almost impeccable , for the exeption of rare and innoticable mistakes from time to time.
    Ihope that whomever is reading this review to give the story a chance and follow it as it had me hooked the moment i read the first few sentences.
    i will not be divulging on the complex system of magic that the writer is using as it might spoil you but i will leave you with this:
    Amazing story give it a chance and you will be certain to add it to your favorit.
  • R0YA|Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I am not a "reviewer" but this volume pushed me to want more from it. The usual trash on this site makes for a quick read, or glossing over, but your writing style and world building draws me in. I seriously hope you get published, or funded, on this work and I want to see more.
    Thanks for bringing me on this journey and I hope you write more frequently, too scatch my itch for a good book!
  • VerratRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Easy going story - some characters are over the top but that´s okay for the genre.
    2 words that are irretating to me in the story are suspicous and paranormal. Some variation and revision of the meantings by the author would do the story some good.
  • hokolomopoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I will start by saying that I enjoyed this novel and I recommand it. It is well written and the story is good.
    But man, the characters. Most of the time they are good and act smart, but on some occasion we are left to wonder if they have a brain. "Wow this usually occupied alley is completely empty and there is a strange ball boucing toward us ? Everything is ok, it is not suspicious at all, stop freaking out dude". But if you can ignore these small episodes of brain paralysis, it is a very good story.
    Oh except for the comic relief best friend. He is just plain stupid and not a character. Why is he here.
  • NameLess_NEETRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I’ve finally had the time to write a review of this one :D
    Triple Orb Academy Preliminary Review
    Chapters read: 01/? of Volume 01
    Story Concept (09/10)
    “Welcome to the world of Zeffernon”. I was actually impressed with the concept. Though ‘magic’ genre was common since before, you’ve still managed to make it interesting because of your well detailed world-building. I was not sure if those magic and alchemic terms originally came from yours or if you researched for them. Either way, the details were very satisfying as if you’re making things real :D Instead of making a pure fantasy magic concept, you’ve decided to create Zeffernon. Here, it’s explained that Zeffernon was different from earth, perhaps it’s better if it’s explained how that world was discovered, or was it a natural knowledge upon them?
    Characters (07/10)
    The characters are fine, maybe I was just looking for more exotic personality :D. I see that the main character’s nature –a dark mage–, is already a common thing in different stories wherein discrimination is the main issue,but there’s no need to worry because there are still plenty of rooms for development through the next chapters. I have a liking with the personality of Sing though; she was just a character that you’ll never hate, probably because she was the most mature from the group.
    Grammar (09/10)
    The grammar was very good. For a novel, I always review the grammar because it is something very important, since most writers disregard that issue. In your case, the story was so easy to read, and the flow was good, there are some typos and technical errors, but it only needs a double or triple check and it’d be fine :D
    Flow (08/10)
    I never thought that it’ll be slow paced. I suppose the story won’t follow the same length as of light novels, this is probably not intended to be something like that I guessed. I’m honestly not a big fan of slow paced story unless I enjoy reading it. In this case, I’m happy to say that you’ve made a job well done. I’m ac