Trinity

Self-Published

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Description

It's been 200 years since The humans of Earth experienced the descent of the Trinity.

TheArêtewas the first thing to arrive, bringing with it what many believed to be superpowers for all.

Then theCorporis,the ideal dream for all those who dreamed of cultivation.

Lastly came the Tree of Infinite possibilities theSystem of Yggdrasil,and its ability to provide a path of improvement for theArêteandCorporis.

At first, while the human race was still adjusting they didn't realize the arrival of the Trinity was a gift to all beings. During the next 50 years, Humans were brought to the brink of extinction by those very creature's they use to keep locked up in cages. It was only thanks to humanity's adaptive nature that after 20 more years they were finally able to rise back up, and with 100 more years take back control of about 80% of the world. (At a slow rate) Read as Jp/CN web novel.

Warning:I'm an amateur writer who simply has a large imagination and wishes to put it into words.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: Aztracity

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 29
Views: 25,376

Chapters(61 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

MezoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This feels Profesional and is great to read. Sadly such high quality seems to take time meaning comparitivly slow updates, but totally worth a read
Eric VanderlipRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Trinity is a portal litrpg Fantasy about an unsatisfied man who finds himself trapped in a dangerous new world.
Style: A consistent perspective and mostly smooth writing. Paradoxically, there is at times too much information provided and at other times not enough (like one man having 2 names and the other having none). On one hand, tangeancially relavent items sometimes have a ton of descriptions about them. On the other, crucial information relating to scene is occasionally omitted.
For example, about the birds which attacked Vincent, were they sparrow-sized or pigeon-sized? what are the shape of their beaks? Did they have teeth? Without this information, the reader has trouble imagining the wounds they cause and the threat each one presents individually. I know more about New York subway doors than I do about the birds that came an inch from ending Vincent's life!
Story: The need for survival in a hostile enviroment drives this plot forward and works well to keep things engaging. The litrpg system also seems fleshed out and interesting.
Grammar: Easily readable. The minor mistakes do not detract from the story.
Character: Narrative revolves around Vincent who serves as a compelling and relatable protagonist except for one major issue. Chapter 1 makes clear that Vincent was suicidal at one point, but we never find out why. Also, Vincent repeatedly references his old life and how bad/unsatisfying it was, but again we aren't told anything. It's harder to connect with a character when they are feeling things for reasons we can't understand. Maybe Vincent's tragic backstory is being saved till later, which is fine, but the reader needs at least enough hints to relate to him. Were Vincent's troubles related love? to a lost loved one? to getting screwed over by a business/person? Give us some crumbs at least!
Conclusion: I recommend Trinity because the story is exciting once it gets going. It's a fun read.
M.G DriverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I can see that the author has truly put his heart and soul into writing this - it's clear that the universe and system is thoroughly developed, with an overarching plot.
Granted, I have not read far enough yet to actually see this develop, but there are already clear signs in the first few chapters.
Style:
The writing style is consistent, stable throughout the various chapters. There is ample description of the characters, scence, monsters and general environment around.
However, the way time skips or timing is done (e.g which day) is not very clear and concise. The story seems to jump back and forth.
The system is also a bit hard to read. I suggest centralizing all system messages and putting them in a custom HTML divider where possible. See other System Novels for inspiration.
One issue I have is the paragraphing. Reading on mobile was really bad as each paragraph took out my entire screen. I'm not sure if the author cares about mobile readers, but this is an important aspect to consider.
There are some parts that feels like the author is directly talking to the reader, which is a bit immersion breaking as well.
Story:
The setting is pretty straightforward - guy gets teleported to another world with a System, fight to survive.
However, I'm failing to find anything unique with the premise that really gets my heart going. The story isn't terrible, it's just fairly normal.
To be fair, I did not get very far (only about eight chapters in), but it's hard for me to make a direct connection from what happened in the prologue to the main story of Vincent's struggles.
Grammar:
The mastery of the english language is evident, and no major flaws were found.
There is a slight error in terms of capitalization being randomized everywhere, or not being consistent at least for System messages.
Character:
To be quite frank, as smart and resourceful as our main character is, there's no driving event that really makes us want to root for him.
In terms of development, his battle skill
UrinRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story and writing are great but the synopsis is so vage, when i read it i had no idea what the story would be about apart from a vague mention of cultivation. There needs to be some actual details about the story and the MC