Trinity Mage

Self-Published

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Description

Life is an enigma… When we are born fate either blesses or curses us. For some though fate plays with them as if they were a puppet. Pulling here and there for a cause that only the Gods can fathom the reasons why.

For Trint the Fates have strung him along on a tale that he could never have dreamed of. Yet will he stay the puppet or will he cut the strings that bind him and carve his own path?

Now Trint must embark from one world to another on an adventure orchestrated by hands unseen, with danger unimaginable, and magic that can only be found in dreams.

Cover Art made by HooinKyoma

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Oscblade

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIKINGDOM BUILDINGREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
467
Views
12,673

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • RunebaneRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I'm sure not everyone will agree, but I like it.  With the MC being special/strong but not completely overpowering the story seems sensible and not crazy extreme.  The emotional choices of the characters are engaging enough to keep me looking forward to the next chapter.
  • ILoveAnimeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Really good read. I could say this is perfect story for me. I'm exited to see what it will develop into. At this point can't really find any flaws. Story is good and text structure is easy to read.
    Story has substance and I like how its bit like toned down Xianxia :P Totally hooks you up.
  • HenleyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great story, i don't have much to say, just that i hope the hero will not become too OP too soon and will grow up slowly
  • lorenzo86Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This fiction is well writen and will captivate you from the begining , I really hope that this fiction will be reagurly updated
  • silkieRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    i like this story some ppl are just going to hate it they can just leave no need to say shit b4 they do plzz keep writing this story
  • TyiciusRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I don't do reviews however, the author requested opinions so here I am. Go to the end if you want to skip the wall of text.
    Opinion based on chapters 1-5:
    This story is fairly fast paced (blazes through childhood). There are a lot of instances where the reader take what the author says without any reasoning. (Ex: Why did he hide his darkness element? His motivation for doing so is missing, initially. He suddenly awakens his magic 5 years early, we didn't even know when that happens). Taking the time to build up the world so your audience isn't bombarded by new, albeit common knowledge for the fictional characters.
    The main character is somewhat shallow. I have a hard time connecting with him at the beginning of the story. I feel like an observer when I read (an effect of 3rd person storytelling - not negative). When he achieves something I should be interested/engaged, I'm not. Alternatively, he is a child. If he is simply ignorant of this information and it's being introduced to him gradually then I can understand. A 5 year old isn't going to understand the complexities of "alien" society.
    Your readers need a world/culture that the character interacts with and is effected.
    Opinion based on chapter 6 - 27
    The pace of the story slows down (more comfortable reading). We start seeing some flashbacks that add depth and motivation to the characters actions (much needed, thanks).
    I noticed there was complaining about the "random" introduction of a female character. Personally I think the character was well done and reacted accordingly to the situation (chapter 9).
    His progress is very fast in chapters 11-13. His abilities are still limited and he does lose (or runs away) which is realistic.
    The characters naivety is annoying. Especially when the reincarnated individual decides to disregard his experience / common sense to pursue an unknown number of bandits. This was a major turn off for me. Though the character does start reflecting when his actions nearly kill one his c
  • PeaceRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I like the way you are heading with your story. A part I really liked was when he met the girl. Meeting a girl at a young age makes it so that he can have a childhood friend and a possible love interest for later on. She can also act as a type of rival if you want to have that in the story later on. Something I thought was pretty good was Umbrus. It can act as both a mentor and a familiar as the story progresses and if you give him other sentient weapons or something for his other affinities then it would be really awesome in my opinion.
    Something you might want to think on is that your story seems a little rushed in places. I personally don’t mind because I like a fast paced story. But it can affect how readable the material is overall and the storyline could take a hit if its rushed. Other than that I think you are doing a good job and hope to see more chapters.
  • kariRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Beginning of the story was interesting And the story concept is good. Unfortunately the execution is lacking. The story telling is not the worst but seems like it’s a first trial of someone who may or may not write a good book someday.
    MINOR SPOILER ALERT FROM HERE!!
    It lacks the excitement in the fight scenes, the shock & awe feel which u get when you get to know that the MC is a genius at magic (chapter where the element-cloak-thing finds out about his soul force & Inquisitor level mana pool). Also his personality is kinda annoyingly dumb…not in the stupid sense, but in the common-sense dept.
    SPOILER (Probably the love interest)
    eg. Elf tries to kill u when u ask her who she is
    Next time u meet her, ur 1st reaction is to almost yell?? FINE, Lets skip that part as a reflex reaction… Then she grabs u into a deserted alley and ur next reaction is to speak to her and Rant?? WTF!? She did not steal something from u, she tried to kill u you dimwit! FIGHT! STRUGGLE! DO SOMETHING MC LIKE! :/
    Also, immediately after that, him wanting to help find her dad n her agreeing is again dumb…
    And also, her being a psycho is also a big negative if she's his love interest
    Anyways, it’s not a bad story, so if u wanna kill some time then go ahead.
  • meddler88Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    *spoiler alert*
    In  chapter 9 an elven girl is met in the woods. This character thinks about why she should kill him then shoots him. This is cold blooded murder. Later on she even admits to herself that the main reason she is sad is not because she believes she killed a 5 year old but because she is alone without her dad. This is a psychotic cold blooded murdering girl and yet the main character does not punish her or anything of the sort. he forgives her and helps her. This is exactly what i was dreading, no consequences for your actions. If you like an MC like this then i 100% recommend this story, for outside of this it is a great story.
  • KandoralRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The beginning of the story was really nice, but gradually it worsened.
    Every chapter feels forced and the same. Not thought through. The character development almost completely stops, description of scenery is nearly non existent later on and so many flaws in the story line that you can fall through the plot holes