TRIAL

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Description

Jake had always been a survivor, navigating the edges of a universe that didn't care if he lived or died. A mercenary by trade, he preferred life in the shadows.

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Status
Hiatus
Author
Asan Te

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREANTI-HERO LEADSCI-FIPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADLOW FANTASYCYBERPUNKMYTHOSDYSTOPIA

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Olivia Astoria-LivTheTransLifeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Disclosure: I was asked by the author to review the first chapter.
    Aelcael is just getting started and has the bones for an interesting scifi story. Good scenery is the best of what the author has shown so far.
    The biggest issues with chapter one are the run on sentences, poor use of italics and boldface, along with small errors strewn throughout.
    We don’t see enough of the main character to get a real feel for him but I hope to have a better understanding by chapter 10.
    Honestly, there isn’t much to say at the moment. The story has potential but it needs work and one chapter isn’t enough to give feedback on.
    To author: Do a line by line edit of the story, remove the run on sentences, fix the formatting issues and I’ll update my review.