Trapped in the Game: An NPC Survival Story

Self-Published

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Description

The game Cosmos has been out for years. Koll Luna has been an eager participant for some time. But, never had he imagined that he would be trapped in it.The menu works, the forums work, quest tabs are fully funtional. And yet, the log out function is disabled. Apparently it only works for player characters...

[This story is influenced byQi Peijia's great work, The Legendary Mechanic.]

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024

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Rating
4.1/ 5.0
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101
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35,045

Chapters(33 total)

What readers say about Trapped in the Game: An NPC Survival Story

  • I like the idea. This book is based on I like the novel about the mechanic. This particular story has the framework of slightly. But enough about that. Let's talk about this story! It's pretty good, I would like it if the characters were fleshed out a littl…
    DeikonRoyal Road4.5 / 5
  • This story is inspired by an existing chinese novel called "The Legendary Mechanic" but takes a unique approach. But ultimately cuts out everything good from the original. I don't really have any one specific thing to comment one, the entire story is messy.…
    JimraynerRoyal Road2.5 / 5

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Community Reviews(2)

  • DeikonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I like the idea. This book is based on I like the novel about the mechanic. This particular story has the framework of slightly.
    But enough about that. Let's talk about this story!
    It's pretty good, I would like it if the characters were fleshed out a little more in the sense of motivation, but with the magic intact together, the ideas and the way the story's moving. I'm enjoying it very much and thank you for this story!
  • JimraynerRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    This story is inspired by an existing chinese novel called "The Legendary Mechanic" but takes a unique approach. But ultimately cuts out everything good from the original. I don't really have any one specific thing to comment one, the entire story is messy. Pacing is all over the place, dialouge is awkward, the setting and character interactions make little sense, etc.
    Overall it reads like an amateurish work that had little thought put into it which is fine but can't really be given a high score.