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Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

DarkClouds

• Chapter 8 Self Pleasure
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter 7 spending time in the water park
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter 6- water park opening day
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter 5- Boosting all my attribute
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter- 4 Constructing a water park resort
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter- 3 Building a Fortress like villa with one of my wishes
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter 2- 6 wishes and wicked sister
  Sep 30, 2019
• Chapter 1 Meeting a Goddess
  Sep 30, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• TarajusticeroadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  ini hebat fiksi-fiksi novel Anda baik dan saya harap Anda tidak melompat ini karena saya suka fiksi grup baru obrolan dan bakat Anda di tulis selanjutnya dan tingkatkan lagi ................... ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
  . memperbarui
• NCrossRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The author is not a native english speaker but it's really good spelling and grammar despite that. The story is a bit fast paced and easy going, not much detailed going around. There's not much character development as well nor any backstories and characters. It's broad if I say if you're watching a movie with much details not being added.
  Overall it's a great story with many improvement needed, a nice way to help pass time.
  Edit: The Author made some correction and made many improvement, again a story with potential, eager to read more.
• SrayanRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I have not read the complete text - first few chapters but I am going to be more critical than NCROSS. I Agree that the basic language skills are ok but other than that the plot (totally OP MC following a truly exponential power curve), characterization (minimal), world setting (well it’s medieval weapons, goblins and orcs), and a princess, and lots of helpless women that need to be rescued by our 12 year old MC. The MC is a straight up good guy - a genuine male “Mary Sue” character.
  The story does have a kind of strangely naive/optimistic freshness to it, if written by a young author I would say it is “promising”.
  I agree it needs HUGE improvement. Right now It does not warrant a 4 star, or even a 3 star. I am generous in my star ratings and often give 5 but I would struggle to go much over 2 stars here.