Transmigrator doesn't want to do this anymore
Self-Published
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Description
You're a hero! You have inherited powers of the Gods! You've finally gotten the power to protect those who you love!
You met the Demon King on day 12 of your Hero Adventure
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- whaling
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 3,397
Chapters(10 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Ginkoboi23Royal Road★★★★ 3.5The writing effects are nice. Mc is average. Villain is decent ig.Grammar needs some work from time to time but the plot is nice.
The novel is short but it can be branched upon easily. The novel is decent at making you feel almost paranoid in the place of the protagonist.
The time reversal ability is used less often than not and needs more usage although it's probably hard stuffing it into 7 chapters. It's also quite worrying that the mc could lose sense of reason if he reverses time again but it's better than dying.
The last chapter got me good with the shatter scene and it's nice that this new book didn't end in 7 chapters. I also appreciate the way that words or phrases are repeated making an ominous ending for example. I opened the door as well as it shattered. Overall the story needs some character development although that pretty much happens naturally with the backlash of the time ability and grammar checks and to just slowdown. I am aware it was fake but my guy slayed the Demon King in chapter 7. The issue with slowing this novel down is that no characters can stick with mc because they all die so he should get something like a familiar or ancient spirit in his head.
Would also prefer to see some backstories or why the demon king is the demon king but that can wait for later after all its only chapter 7.