Transmigration to the Otherworldly Heavens

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Description

Transmigration is really tough ordeal. You never know what is awaiting you on the other side of summoning circle. There is bound to be misunderstanding, confusion, perhaps a certain amount of violence. Isekai, or an Otherworld, can be full of danger, it’s people might have too different beliefs and customs. They might be monsters or treat you as one.

It’s always full of surprises, both good and bad. Mostly bad.

Especially if the summoner is not "kidnapping" you to hire as the Hero..

but as the God.

With every single trouble that entails.

Published weekly on Scribblehub, RoyalRoad, Honeyfeed and Patreon*.*One chapter ahead so far.

Discord channel: https://discord.gg/7SDw4gFZX6

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Werelynx

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.1/ 5.0
Followers: 38
Views: 21,520

Chapters(45 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

VoxolRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The first few chapters were a little clunky and off-putting but I am glad I stuck around, the quality is improving and making a quite enjoyable story. The story itself fits a slightly underappreciated area of isekai.
While the MC himself is not the most interesting person, I quite like the side characters that have appeared so far and I am very interested in seeing how the story turns out.
SlipperyDoorknobRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Either you write for fun, because you must, or some demon has possessed you for the past four months. It is not an easy thing to write something for so long despite gaining limited success. I have to commend you for it. You know your world and similar media.
Time for the stick. The book reads like a translated webnovel, and does not use quotation marks for dialogue (""). There are far too many one-line paragraphs, and some parts of the story make me wince (chapter 8's slavery stuff). Spell names and classes are chuunibyou, too.
My best advice would be to A) learn from other stories, and B) rewrite the book.
A) Grab a few published books you enjoy, or look at a well written webnovel. Rewrite a small portion of a chapter, mimicking their way of writing. How do they handle dialogue? How are there paragraphs structured/ how long are they? How do they describe something? Write it down, and try it for yourself.
B) After you finish with A, write chapter one using what you have learned. Afterwards, leave it for a day. Reread your first chapter one, then the one you wrote afterwards. Hopefully it reads a lot better.
Improvement is a process you have to work towards. If you do not try to, nothing will change. I want to see you write something that I binge read until my eyes are blurry, and my spine bends like half-cooked spaghetti.
Sorry if this reads cruelly,
SlipperyDoorknob.