Transmigrating Upgrade Specialist

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Description

After transmigration, Zhang Wu Ji is reincarnated into a youngster body with the same name.Their differences?Before reincarnated, he was a poor librarian that have to sleep in the library because he can't afford to rent a room. After reincarnated, he was a poor bastard that was despised by his two elder brothers because he was born with a worthless Martial Constitution.But as a Transmigrator, he possessed a special System, [Upgrade] that allows him to strengthen anything in this world. How would he fare when he will need to earn, create, upgrade, and upgrade even more to reach the peak of the world?

Author Note:This is a new attempt of mine for a serious piece of work. Grammarly already in used, but not the premium version one (it cost me a hundred pounds for a year subscription), I occasionally check my works and read the comments, so I hope more productive comment thanks.English is not my main language, I am merely a graduate that came out to work, live, married, and write. I hope the mistakes that were done in the chapters can be accepted if it could, amended if I can, and advised if I get.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: yungsern87

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 374
Views: 259,895

Chapters(103 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

WillyHRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I lack of sleep last night coz im reading this. Now my astma relaps. But its worth it. This story ideas kinda like upgrade specialis in WW, with different style, plot and characters. Its easy to read eventough poor grammar in some place but I think it will get better with more experience you got from writing. 👍👍👍👍👍
ElfendragoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story may have a few grammar issues but I found it easy to read and understand. And don't listen to haters who don't realise that no author starts off good and there is no such thing as perfect it's all preference. I enjoyed the story if you would like to continue I could proofread for you if you would like. Anyway ididnt mind the fast pace and development. Was it meant as a serious story or an enjoyable hour by. In my opinion the system genre is all fast paced and most are enjoyable
finaltheorem47Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Up to chapter 55ish so far, still reading. The grammer is very poor at the beginning thus my poor rating (sorry author). I understand that English is not his first language so keep practicing! If the grammer was fixed, my rating would be 4.5 stars as of chapter 55+.
I hope you continue to write and improve. I've already noticed a trend of improvement from the first chapter. Good luck!
WaytocoolRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Huge improvements have been made!
DangerMaou55Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
yes its a little odd and there is a few mistakes or the names im not very used to are sometimes hard to follow. There is also the problem i think the author occasionally forgets certain items or aspects but other than that i enjoy a nice OP character with humility. i like how events in the story take place and i feel its worth trying to read up to a key event before you make an assumtion. i am a person not that bothered by sentence structure and stuff so this is perfectly acceptable for reading otherwise judge for yourself.
JknottRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
You should work on your sentence structure and word use. Exchange some words or phrases to make it flow better, Or find someone to edit the book for you. I like the concept of the book though and id love to read more. I didnt see any spelling errors and thats always a plus. You should also flesh out your character more. He suddenly finds himself in the woods after being hit by a car and he doesnt freak out even a little bit? New body and hes just fine? Then he manages to create healing/mending pills in an hour. Could sort of see that if he was a chemist in his previous life but none of his previous life is mentioned. Please Please PLEASE get an editor or proofreader. This book is vety hard to read because i have to read a sentence 2 or 3 times think up better wording before i can continue to the next sentence
meerschaumRoyal Road
★ 1.0
The story is unoriginal, yet another "transmigrator with a game-like cheat". That would be forgiveable, but ...
The narration tells us the character is good, but he views every interaction in terms of what he gets out it. He makes no effort to know people. He has almost no reaction to being cast out of his old world and thrown into a new one.
Grammar and diction errors are constant, which would be forgiveable if the story had more going on. Plot events seem to follow each other without much rhyme or reason. It's quite likely that there are a lot of references that I'm missing, sure, but it just doesn't make much sense. It could be parodying something I'm not familiar with. It has some charm, but I've read stories like this with more charm and with less to overlook and try to ignore. The character is boring, the narration somewhat contradictary, and the story doesn't make much sense even in its own internal logic. It's not the language barrier, but the lack of an inner life for the protagonist, that the character doesn't act like people act - that almost none of the characters act like people, and that plot events don't make much causal sense.
I don't hate it, but I really can't recommend this to anyone.
JekyllRoyal Road
★ 1.0
I was expecting poor grammar, but it discouraged me from reading after four paraghraps. It may be good story wise, but I am no native english speeker and don't want to learn bad habits.
If you want more readers, please get a proofreader and maybe I will give it another chance.
ParsiaRoyal Road
★ 0.5
I would invest in Grammarly.
Even your synopsis raped my eyes.
the first few sentences violated my brain functions.
But the concept is okay I guess. I read for like 30 seconds before I slammed the return key.
InbetweenactionRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The story seems OK. Very inspired by upgrade specialist, but seems OK.
But the grammar... Mate, even your edited version is horrible. I can read most things, and my own grammar is not super good, but this was painful
Get a proof reader, or the story is unreadable. And it really does have potential to be fairly decent
Couldn't get long enough to comment on characters due to the grammar