Transmigrated Vampire

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Vampire Prince

• Chapter - 8 - Guild
  Feb 12, 2018
• Chapter - 7 - Entering the City
  Jan 20, 2018
• Chapter - 6 - Truly a God of Trickery and Mischief
  Jan 5, 2018
• Chapter - 5 - Hints of the Past
  Dec 12, 2017
• Chapter - 4 - Pact
  Dec 6, 2017
• Chapter - 3 - Getting Stronger
  Nov 24, 2017
• Chapter - 2 - Mistakes Were Made!
  Nov 14, 2017
• Chapter - 1 - Awakening
  Nov 6, 2017
• Prologue - Embracing Death
  Nov 2, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• TrashlynRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Ok I am loving this isekai, not just because I love sapphic stories or cause i love vampires or wolfgirls.
  gunna keep on reading this!
• Undead WriterRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like the story and style.  It was hard to get past the not-so-great prologe but as the story progresses the writting style gets better.  I also like the fact that you arent afraid to add sexual scenes to your story and a romance.  Most stories hint at romance or sexual scenes so actually having them in your story is refreshing.  Look forward to the rest of your story.  Wish you posted more.
• brandistRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  It's a good story but not perfect. Of course there are things that are 'wrong', but those are mainly forgetting a word or stuff like that.
  But my final judgement is fun and good story so far.
• KydsdadRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Excellent start.  Well written and engaging.  read the chapter 3 times lol.  really enjoyed it and hope you add more often.  Thanks
• BastTheCatRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Really hope this comes back. It had some grammar and pacing issues, but I was excited to see where it ended up going. And for someone's first try at writing, it was pretty good.
• Lord of a Thousand BladesRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  alright this will most likly not be kind so do keep in mind im going for constructive critizizm and not simply calling you worthless, here we go:
  1. the prologue: first rule of backstorys show dont tell, through interactions or memorys allude to your familys seedy history dont TELL us in a canned inner monolouge that simply isnt likly to happen the ONLY exeption is if your character shatters the fourth-wall, any other time, show dont tell
  2. profesional assasinations pay well, as in 200000-700000 a year well, his family (if they truly are hitmen) should either no longer be working as hitmen or stuck in deep, to the criminal/corp./governmential tangled web. So bassicaly this kid does not most-likly go to some public school.
  3. he saves the girl, the ONLY reason he should do this is if he is hopeing for solely a reincarnation and was already thinking of suicide. simply put he comes from a wealthy-(ish) family and has been trained since birth to kill people, if you think that doesnt fuck with a guys value of life your very wrong. there are many pchology reports on captured hitmen you could look up if your interested, point is he would have either been killed by his parents for attempting excape or watched passivly as the girl died... it just doesnt make sence otherwise.
  4. your writing needs improvement, take classes keep writing take critizizm on style and incorperate what you like but if somone tells you what your story should be honestly, as the author imagination is your job (and so is geting your thoughts into words that provoke images into others minds) and not ours.
  final thoughts: keep writing but you definitly need improvement.
  Edit: holy fuck some people did't like this review... wow.
• luda305Royal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  It's troubling how highly rated this story is. Then again, it's four years old and a discount should be applied to the older stories on the site. I do not recommend this story.
  The writing style is poor. Huge chunks are just telling us, rather than showing us. It's mostly in first person POV, but rather than an internal monologue, it's written as if it's directed to an audience by the protagonist. There are also occasional paragraphs with abrupt shifts in POV which is jarring and disorienting. Overall, it's reminiscent of a mediocre Japanese light novel poorly translated into English.
  The grammar and spelling could use work. Very obvious typos are missed that would have been caught in a quick review.
  The protagonist appears to be perfect, with no real obstacles or conflicts in place. Lots of wish fulfillment in the egregious unearned way. And has a very, very disturbing attitude to suddenly becoming a woman. Also, strangely unselfaware. Also, elements where the protagonist consciously leans into the cliches of the genre, which just brings a meta level of hand wringing for the audience.
  The plot seems pretty straightforward, but the style and characters mad it difficult for me to get past a few chapters.