Tragedy of the Immortal

Self-Published

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Armed with an ideal, and the swordplay of a master, Barbara runs away from home, hoping to make a difference, and fight for what she believes is right. Determined to enlist and join the frontlines on the side of the resistance, she travels to Pillotlan, where she meets friends, enemies, and gets a true taste of the type of life she is determined to live.

Recounting the legend of Barbara Kelak, the phoenix of the glass desert.

Once a peerless swordmaster, she is cursed with a spirit of fire that grants her immortality, now she roams the land hoping to find a way to finally rid herself of the unwanted spirit, and regain her mortality.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2022

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
11
Views
5,850

Chapters(22 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • luda305Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    One, the verb tense is unusual. I thinks it's present tense. This may or may not bother you.
    Two, the story is of the beginning of Barbara's legend. The whole bit about the cursed immortal is the future, if not far future. That said, the prologue is in this future where she's this cursed immortal, and then chapter 1 goes back to the beginning of her legend.
    Three, if it's not clear from the synopsis, the story takes place in an alternate universe mesoamérica where the Columbian exchange was less destructive to the natives. I think. (The exposition is dripfed at a good rate which means that we don't have all the answers yet).