Towards the Valentine

Self-Published

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Description

The ups and downs of highschool, especially between childhood friends that love each other with the other not knowing about it.

Author's Note

I entered this short story in the recent WriTE Valentine's Competition and earned the "Best Romance Score" award. While it wasn't a total victory, it was something, and I'm thankful for it. Now, here's the uncut version with the full blown out short story that I had to cut down to 5k word limit to enter the competition. Enjoy!

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2018
Author
Vertrex

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Rating
4.8/ 5.0
Followers
3
Views
1,006

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This romance story is a good short read. It has some good character interaction and dialogue, but the prose has a few errors and the choice of expressions can be a bit awkward at times. I am a little surprised at the characters being careless and thoughtless which made for a dramatic, but almost entirely unnecessary hurdle. Even on the point of Vijay himself, I can expect a little density but given the circumstances it felt as if the twist was born out of a desire to make a twist.