Torn World

Self-Published

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Description

Nathan Jones is an 18-year-old who has just recently been accepted into his favorite college. To celebrate, he invites his friends to a vacation on an island in the Bahamas that was just recently made tourist-friendly. Little did they know that the island was a magic portal into a different world like in the Light Novels that Nathan read in his spare time. In this world, there are demons roaming about and destroying kingdom after kingdom after escaping the Great Abyss made by the first hero of the land Liathys. Being 4 Legendary classes, it is up to these 4 friends to use their godly powers to restore peace to the world, all of them doing it in their own way.

The original title was "In A Torn World Where Cheat Specs Save Our Lives", but I thought it was too long so I changed it to simply "Torn World".

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Freww6

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAI

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
51
Views
48,811

Chapters(28 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • PastawayRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Not going to go into much detail as I don't have but 11 chapters at the time of this writing, but the summary goes as such:
    The world is still new and maturing, so I think you'd look forward to that.
    The characters seem to not be arbitrarily made and have their own unique characteristics with none neglicted as of yet.
    The writing style is good, but I don't have something of 'high quality' to compare it with, so that is just my own reading experiences.
    Didn't notice any mistakes, and if I forgot any, then they must be minor and won't ruin the flow of reading.
    All in all, just like the title says, it looks promising, and I look forward to more.
    Cheers,
    PastaWay.
    PS: first review on this story, give me a cookie. Heh.
  • KrimetyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I really am enjoying the storyline. There are a few grammatical errors every now and then, but it is really coming along.
  • ZekRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Although the content is top quality I had to drop out early because of the stupidity of some of the characters. for example in the empire arc when tanner just straight up ignores the feelings he's getting and the fact that Nathan's door was unlocked, I understand seeing some of that stuff because it's what adds suspense to a story but these moments keep stacking up and this ruined the story for me.