To Protect

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Description

Of all that drives man, rare is the desire to protect others. Rarer still is those that act on that drive to defend the weak and save those in need. But those that do act are heroes, men and woman willing to risk everything to do what is right. Allen was one such person whose courage forced him to act in a time of crisis.

But not all stories end happily. Though he is successful in saving others, he himself pays the ultimate price. Now, Allen is reborn to a new life. A new home in a new world. With everyone he meets speaking a language hes never heard before, hes going to have to take one small step at a time to understand this new reality of his.

Baby steps in fact.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Galen Chronicler

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 490
Views: 100,412

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Community Reviews(5)

ScorpionRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Ok so this a bit of a premature review but this story already deserves something. Grammar is top notch, style is great with leaving enough room for the readers imagination. Add in a humor that is hard to not to like and I was chuckling to myself for both of the only two chapters. Character building has already started with a fair bit of info. Story direction is not developed yet but strangely wouldn't care if it didn't ever because of the humor in the story. Just keep it up.
TeggyWeggyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a pretty great read. Its a shame it was dropped though, I can already imagine the main character turning into a paladin similar to Gunther Schultz from Metaworld Chronicles. It would've been great.
CrimsonmercRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Well first things first, overall I am a huge fan of this story and hope for its contiuation. I'd have to say my favourite part is the characters so many stories nowadays just cant get it right either it be uninteresting mcs or just a lack of details however this story does it well and it stops huge info dumps that most amatuer authors and some profesional authors still do. The thing I want is more from his younger age however if the rest is as entertaining as the story has currently been I will forgive you :) (edit) pace is good don't change it unless you want a short story
I am a fan of this story and truly just wish it not to end early like so many other gems that you would find from burn outs or authors just nor caring. Keep up the good work your'e an inspiration for novelists to look up to and take breaks when you need it. Thats all i got to say and thanks for brighting up my day.
(Edit) -- oh also you might want to change the title I made sure to avoid this in particular because it appeared to be like other rank amatuer novels...... Which usually ends up bad. Despite this as soon as I read the description my thoughts changed as cleary you are proficent in certain categories.
ScandalfRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
as of chapter 16
I didn't think I found such a good novel before I read first few chapters. It totally surprised me, in a good way ofc. As you can see from the scores I gave it, I personally think this novel is one of the better reads on this site and should be read by anyone who likes another world novels with good characters.
I am guessing this author is experienced and is a native english speaker because while I was reading this I never had to read a sentence twice for any reason. Also, things are easy to understand, what should be focused on is told to us more than other things and conversations are smooth and realistic.
About plot, I can't really say anything. Because we still have almost no idea what is this story going to be about. There are hints and small things but who knows which one of those hints will lead to a big plot and which one will lead to a mere small trouble.
Characters, haaaa. Everything would be perfect for me, if we just delete that childhood love(pfff) completely. I mean it is so cliche and stupid. Him promising that 5 years old girl that he will marry her when they grow up is so unnecessary and it's also obvious it will create some stupid misunderstandings and trouble between mc, the girl(s) he will bring back with him to his hometown and that childhood friend girl. I mean he is mentally 27 years old so he should know what marrying means better than most of the people there. Why would he make such a promise with a 5 year old of all people. She doesn't even understand what marrying is actually like. And I also didn't like how he acted towards that girl. He knew she was starting to like him and he didn't want her to start loving him. But he just kept doing stuff that would definitely make a 5 year old fall in love with a boy of her age. Helping her, calling her to a party only nobles can attend to when she is not a noble, telling her about how lightning and thunder isn't scary and stuff, dancing with her. Like, are you secretly a pedophile?
aaron1986Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
A brilliant story so far. Likeable and clever MC, who so far manages to be good yet no push over. Also it's good to see a story where slight humour actually adds to the story.
Please don't drop this story and keep up the good work.