To Become A River
Self-Published
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Description
A sweet but ultimately tragic short story of a father and daughter struggling to keep their island in the sky. Be captivated by the fantastical world of Zephyr and feel with the heartwarming pair so filled with hope and spirit.
This is a stand-alone short story that takes place in the same setting as my current larger project called Tales of Zephyr. Here you get to discoverhow things stay afloat in a world with no solid core. Let me know if the story reads ultimately sad or hopeful to you.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- VVVVVV
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 378
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This was an interesting piece, the setting itself is described enough to make some sense, but the whole concept feels a little undeveloped. How does it work, why is the state so bad and why do they not do anything about it are all valid questions. The character development is good and then that ending hits. The ending does feel rushed and that holds the story back a bit, but it is otherwise pretty good.