Timeless Cheater

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Description

There are times when Mahala, a average Asian male 17 years of age, wishes that he is above all existence. It's not that he loath humans or hate his normal life of, sleep, eat, toilet break, school, games, and then sleep again, no he's just very very curious of what is feels like to hold that kind of power.

He is not power hungry, just curious. He prayed day and night to an almighty being for he is an atheist, to let him wield that kind of power but confine him in a space to let him learn all of it first before releasing him back.

What Mahala, didn't know is that the almighty being did hear his prayer and his wishes. However, it will comes back to bite at him because he will be confine in a grass field where he can do what ever he wants for 300 billions years...

Note: I did not drew the cover, my niece did it for fun and uh it came out pretty well right? Anyway enjoy reading.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Ten Strings

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 41
Views: 21,961

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

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★★★ 2.5
WILL HAVE SPOILERS; READ THE STORY FOR YOURSELF
I'm going to put this out here right here and now: I like the story. I think it is fun to read. It isn't great, but it is enjoyable.
The story is worth the read if you like overpowered main characters. He is basically God, and the story is about him and his travels.
Honestly, this story was similar to the one I currently have a rough draft for (The God and the apocalypse part). Mine, however, isn't wuxia/xianxia.
Getting back to this story, it is somewhat a joke. The story doesnt flow too well, but it at least works.
You'll find yourself noticing the clunkiness of the story as a whole as you read it, and you'll also quickly notice the bad grammar. The speech seems almost constipated, and the Main character has a very typical wuxia/xianxia attitude (arrogance).
None of the characters are really fleshed out at all. The main character is the only one who you really know anything about, because his supposed children just showed up one chapter out of nowhere.
The premise is interesting. You have the all powerful MC, possibly creating an apocalypse where humanity has to try and survive, and God (him) hides amongst the humans to grow with them for fun. How it is executed, however, is not professional.
The story is so far pretty fun to read and I recommend it. However, compared to some of the gems on this site, it is a joke. It needs work. You should really read it for yourself and either drop it or keep it.