Time-Leap With Certain Possibilities - "Future Part"
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Continuation of 1st Book of "Time-Leap" with some extra or you can say some information regarding an another storys timeline titled "Love in the Battlefield".
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- DemoloRD
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 4,424
Chapters(6 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- the watcherRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am giving you 5 overall score because the way you described your first 3 chapters were quite amazing well written maybe you are getting some writing ideas from other people's stories. Good going though.
This story seems to be very promising more than 1 way or another.
Story development going great so far and am eager to find out about what actually happened to Vina and who shot the laser from the space, there seems to be a lot things or topics which needs some lights on them
There seems to be some punctuation problems on some places or other, not on too much places for me to stop reading those chapters though.
You actually did quite good describing these recent 2 chapter and i am kind a little glad you did so. I actually am quite glad you did that.
A well described story is always a good story, my own opinion though which defers from others.
Thanks for giving us chance of reviewing such a wonderful story (from my prospective though) it can't be helped if others don't think so.
Well we will see if they also gave some reviews on your story.
Well, lets see what "Future" awaites, or was that past again?
Loving the story so far, and hope you will continuing doing the good deed.
Looking forward for the next chapter.