Through the Glass Portal [A LITRPG Portal Fantasy]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

A.N. Tainter

• Author Update
  Nov 29, 2023
• Chapter Thirty-Four
  Nov 27, 2023
• Chapter Thirty-Three (Continued)
  Nov 20, 2023
• Chapter Thirty-Three
  Nov 20, 2023
• Chapter Thirty-Two
  Nov 17, 2023
• Chapter Thirty-One
  Nov 13, 2023
• Chapter Thirty
  Nov 10, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Nine
  Nov 6, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Eight
  Sep 29, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Seven
  Sep 27, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Six
  Sep 25, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Five
  Sep 24, 2023
• Announcement
  Sep 18, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Four
  Sep 15, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Three
  Sep 13, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-Two
  Sep 11, 2023
• Chapter Twenty-One
  Sep 8, 2023
• Chapter Twenty
  Sep 7, 2023
• Chapter Nineteen
  Sep 6, 2023
• Chapter Eighteen
  Sep 5, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• Stark GottoRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  First of all the characters are written perfectly, every last one of them. I really enjoyed the conversation between them and their relationship.
  Watching Moira and Duke level up, develop, and adventure into the unknown is beautiful and intriguing.
  In most Isekai it is just random information trying to get more word count, but in this one everything has a purpose which I really liked. And the conversation between the characters isn't dull, it carries some weight.
  Grammar is perfect no need to comment on that. It is written in a simple but at the same time amazing way, very easy to read but beautiful at the same time!
  The stats are also very well thought of, it gives a lot of information and mystery at the same time.
  The story is going into a great direction, more characters are introduced which adds to more complexity. When it comes to characters not all of them are likable which is great because in real life it is the same thing, you can't like everyone.
  And the writer plays with the readers emotions, showing that this isn't a perfect world for our protagonist, but danger is lurking for everyone. There is not plot armor.
  All in all, an amazing story so far and I can't wait to read more. Definitely giving it a follow.
• Jules Kindred BlairRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Loaded with symbolism, this story is written with true feeling and urgency. The MC feels like a real person and the grounded elements in the opening chapter increase the stakes of the other worldly experience she finds herself in. I feel the affection the author has for this character.
  The prose is sparse but evocative. The colors, the sounds, and even the scents come alive. I found myself smiling several times while reading through the initial chapters and look forward to following Moira’s journey. It is an adventure, but also suffused with a cozy warmth.
  The story moves forward at a quick pace. Almost immediately our heroine is crafting weapons, gaining skills, and fighting monsters. The MC’s companion, a black standard poodle named Duke, is a great addition. Then Cyrus arrives as a foil and the story elevates once again - almost a classic ‘screwball comedy’ vibe between Moira and Cyrus’s interactions.
  And you can’t go wrong with sentences like this:
  “In front of her stood a giant lizard the size of a Honda Odyssey minivan.”
  and
  “Squelch
  Suddenly, it popped free. The force pushed Moira onto the ground, and she smoothly landed on her butt, in a puddle of blood and slime.”
• bearzhuRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Enthralling story with highly relatable characters that feel real. High degree of immersion with the author's masterful use of world-building and imagery. Great usage of RPG elements to keep me engaged and attached to the characters. Minor grammatical errors but nothing that can't be fixed with a final round of edits. Can't wait to see what happens next!
• drewclaarRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The protagonist, Moira, is both familiar and empathetic, serving as an anchor for the reader in a world on the cusp of extraordinary events. Her poignant struggles, both internal and external, are captured with sensitivity and authenticity, making her instantly relatable.
  The writing style effortlessly creates a vivid imagery that pulls the reader in, starting with a haunting dream sequence that promises more than what meets the eye. The transition from Moira's corporate world, laden with a palpable sense of ennui, to a larger-than-life event in the form of a mysterious portal, is executed with finesse. These transitions are beautifully symbolic, hinting at the underlying theme of the story—that there's more to life than what we see on the surface.
  Duke, Moira's loyal poodle, is more than just a pet. He's a testament to the idea that sometimes, the most ordinary of companions can bring extraordinary joy.
  The ups and downs of the story will definitely have you in your feelings for better or worse.
• JTAckerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Overall Score: 4.5 stars
  I've had the pleasure of delving into a captivating story that seamlessly combines elements of action, mystery, and character development. The world-building is engaging, transporting readers into a mysterious realm where the protagonist, Moira, navigates a labyrinth-like forest filled with unique creatures. As I read through the chapters, the vivid descriptions and immersive writing style truly brought the environment and characters to life.
  Style Score: 4 stars
  The author's writing style keeps you hooked from the start, whisking you away into a world that's both fascinating and dangerous. The portrayal of the forest, with its moving trees and mysterious inhabitants, is vivid and imaginative. Moira's first-person perspective allows for a deeper connection with her thoughts and feelings, enhancing the emotional resonance of the narrative. While the prose is effective, a touch more variation in sentence structure could add even more depth to the pacing.
  Story Score: 4.5 stars
  The unfolding tale is a skillful blend of suspense and personal growth. Moira's encounters with a variety of creatures keep the plot engaging, as she grapples with both the challenges of this new realm and her own inner strength. The concept of a quest system and the levels of monsters lend a unique gaming-like twist to the story.
  Grammar Score: 4.5 stars
  The author's command of grammar, punctuation, and spelling is evident throughout the story, contributing to a polished reading experience. Minor errors don't detract significantly from the narrative flow. A final proofread could help iron out any remaining minor issues.
  Character Score: 4.5 stars
  Moira is a relatable and well-developed protagonist, making it easy to root for her as she faces the unknown challenges of the forest. Her growth and determination lend depth to the narrative, and her bond with her companion, Duke, adds a heartwarming layer to the story. The variety of creatures she encounters showcases the aut
• scarstoboneRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  TL;DR
  A short beginning that has potential to improve, but at the moment has flaws that exist made worse by the short length, limited characters, and lack of direction beyond "This is a Isekai/LitRPG story". Many events have started to build on the idea of a larger narrative, however aren't fleshed out by the world building or characters enough yet to make this worth checking back every week for a new chapter. I think there is a lot of room for the story to improve, and if the idea of having a dog get transported with the main character appeals to you, give this story a read.
  Longer Review:
  While there are currently very few chapters, there is a beginning of a good story here. I normally shun short chapters because I feel like you either miss out on details, miss out on actually conveying your point, or you have situations where the pacing gets weird when you use say 1000 words to describe a forest but only 300 to describe a death that's supposed to have ramifications for the whole plot. For this story, I think the grammar and writing style itself is fine (with a few hiccups), though with the limited chapters I can't tell what this story is supposed to be yet.
  If it's going to be a drama or love story, maybe think to include a bit more basis to who the MC is (maybe in the pre portal section) assuming you want more than the baseline of "life is dull and gray, everyone sucks, but at least I love my dog". If this is just a self insert story, feel free to have the author stay in character, but that may detract from the enjoyment of those who don't know the author well enough to see the complexities of the story they want to tell. If this is just a hero's journey situation, then there isn't enough about the hero yet to want her to succeed. The story as it is could go in any of those directions.
  Style and grammar are again written in a good way, but some random moments just come up that make them take a small hit. For example, the MC female lead is transported to the new
• ErumwhatRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I really wanted to like this story, but the plot feels forced. Like instead of the world just being brutally cruel, the MC makes mistakes that deserve the Darwin award. I can not stand MCs that don't use their attribute points. It would be understandable if she never played video games before, but she was an MMORPG player.
  She also had someone tell her that using her points could be a matter of life and death. Worse yet, she's trapped in a forest for a week hunting critters that are giving her minor injuries. She just brushes it off because she's getting healing potions. But why would some not just go hmm...I wish there was a way to not get hurt in the first place. Is she a masochist? Instead of using her points to become stronger, she just repeatedly takes damage.
  Oh and the other Darwin award for grabbing a red shiny ominous stone. Maybe the story was trying to imply she's possessed?
  Oh best yet, dude who's supposed to help her leaves the forest and goes to the city. He couldn't at least camp in front of the forest to wait for her? He got a quest to try to make her join his party, but why would she ever? Not like he was much help.
  It's a shame because the grammar is fine and there's some interesting fantasy ideas. But it feels like it needs heavy editing.