Through the Generations

This story is about a clan and it's beginning and it's end and the mark it left in the world and in the people.

Hello this is my first time writing a story and I hope to learn how to fix my problems in writing and how to make it better. So please commentconstructive criticism to help make it better. The idea of the story is about a young boy making his own clan and slowly rising to the top of the world. In this world there are bloodlines which grant special powers to its holders making clans and their bloodlines very important. There will be more than one MC due to the plan of the story going through 100ish years so it will talk about his descendents as well. HOPE YOU ENJOY!!

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