Those left behind

Self-Published

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Description

Transiting into a new world.

Restarting your life.

A second chance.

But... what about those left behind?

A Transition and Restart sideshow. Short story, completed at publication.

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Status
Completed
Year
2019

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Rating
3.0/ 5.0
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3
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413

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    While not particularly clear on the prompt for this story, it is one that has been split into two halves containing a news report and reaction to the death of Ulf. There is no emotional connection made, no reason to have empathy. It is not bad, but the middle switches to anger and fury over a past incident unrelated to Ulf's death and that distracts from keeping a steady tone and building to a meaningful moment.