This Slimy Melting Heart

Self-Published

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Description

“Family, precious beyond all worth, right?”

Elizabeth was promised the warmth of a family and sent into another world. What wasn’t promised was that she and her family would not be humans, but Monster Girls. Now, as a Slime Girl, she had to rediscover her place in the world. Fortunately, she had a family to help her go through everything. They would protect her from all harm, and she would do the same.

Because of such, she was the perfect candidate, a Monster Girl, an Otherworlder—everything was waiting for her.

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The story has an element of Girl Love.

Author's Note: update every four days. The cover is drawn by Abi_boge.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2021
Author: gdlizy

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 377
Views: 346,098

Chapters(318 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

VatiarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A relaxing and enjoyable read with a little bit of spice.
This story may be far from the level of quality of the best Royal Road has to offer, it is nonetheless far above the trash that its crurent rating of 3.5 would have you believe are its peers.
The writing is decent, the updates frequent, the world is intriguing if rather manichean and both the story and the characters are quitte charming.
Overall a nice story written by a hardworking author. Keep up the good work!
NotSoSharpSwordRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I mean, I don't like this novel after reading 25 chapters, since it's basically monster girl lesbian p*** with plot, but that's your thing go for it I guess. Now if you'll excuse me, I need to atone, because I've read up to 25 chapters of this and that's probably going to be a permanent stain on my existence now :)
sharoncorsolaRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The previous two reviews were left by people who were obviously not into the monster girl genre. By contrast, I've read plenty of monster girl stories- ranging from MGE stories, to Monster Musume stories, to Pokegirl stories. When it comes to explicit content within those stories, I particularly enjoy yuri over het. In other words, when I saw this story, and saw the two reviews, I decided to read it myself so it could have a review from the sort of reader it was aimed at.
Let's start with the good. The grammar and style are both well-done. Considering the author is from Thailand, it makes the high quality even more remarkable. If they hadn't stated their country of origin, I could have easily mistaken them for a native English speaker. Grammar mistakes are few enough that I see no problem with assigning a full 5 stars to the grammar score part of the rating. The style is similarly high-quality, regularly using vivid and imaginative descriptions with varied word choice.
When it comes to the story and character scores... Those are the definite weak points of the story, compared to the 5 star worthy style and grammar scores. As far as the characters go, the first 30 or so chapters have predictable repitition regarding the interaction of humans and monster girls. Humans are loyal to a vicious church, and any human that becomes amicable to the protagonists quickly becomes a monster girl. This fortunately changes with
the introduction of Fugria and Kalender- although it's puzzling as to how that even worked, given Iris' terrible treatment of Fugria.
At first, when I saw that the humans who turned into monster girls kept showing hesitation over sex before embracing both their species and their newfound lust, I assumed brainwashing. This fit with the narrative's emphasis on monster girls being the result of a 'corruption'. However, that assumption was shattered when I read through the part detailing the backstory of the character Lenmia.
When she was first transformed from
HegelundRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
this is basically just a vehicle for erotica, but with a bit of rape, instead of romance or foreplay.
the whole thing just feels kinda off. in terms of worldbuilding there's the monster girl forest, and "The Church" and it kinda feels like that's all there is to the world. then there's how skewed it all feels towards women, there are no monster men, only monster girls, and all the really important church people are women and some of them are weirdly attracted to the monster girls.
it's just kinda uncomfortable and nonsensical.
edit: just to be clear i dont have a problem with girls being attracted to girls, it's the fact that monster girls are almost like a plague on the world. they have an instinctual need to kill all humans and forcibly transform all women into monster girls, it's horrific.