This Matter of Life and Death

I have been working on this story for about a year now and unfortunately not gotten far.  I've had it looked over been my honors English teacher and she says she has no editorial suggestion on any f the chapters so now it is just a matter of inspiration to continue.  So feedback would be greatly appriciated!  Should I keep going?

This story is about a young man named Pedro Garcia who's life is abrunptly ended and he finds himself being told that he will become the new personification of Death.  This story consists of a fictional afterlife created by me that has personifications of Life and Death.