Third Life in the Post-Apocalyptic Earth

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Victor Hunt, an orphaned child of a kingdom's best awakens, escaped from an experimental facility where he was brought after his parents died when he was eight years old. But after eight years, everything was due to change, when the memories of his first and second life rushed into his brain at the same time he awakened.

He sought to take his revenge on those who had wronged him and regain the life that was stolen from him. Although he managed to escape, it wasn't enough for a previous honorable man like himself—he also wanted all those who were responsible for chasing after him brought down just as low as he was before they'd taken any pathetic attempts at making their lives better off of others' suffering.

Chapters(16 total)

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  • PlowmanPlowRoyal Road
    0.5
    The writing here is just absolutely terrible. Poor word choice, terrible sentence structure, confusing scene jumps, ridiculous character motivations, inconsistent world building... the list goes on and on. The story has potential, but the author desperately needs someone to provide editing feedback on the *way* the story is written, and on how to craft prose structure which is readable and not jarring/confusing/distracting. As it is, it is practically unreadable. With some improvements I'd love to come back and try the story again.