Theomancer

Self-Published

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Description

An irascible reject from modern society ends up as one of the summoned people in another world after a cataclysmic event rips his original dimension apart, but will the premise of a chance to start over hold up to the reality of how things work? only one way to find out!

Follow along Darwin's adventures while he pioneers his unrecorded class in a whole new world, where colors and willpower are two of the most important things to keep in mind to survive, besides respecting the local Gods (and avoiding stronger pricks that are just waiting for an excuse to trample over someone).

This is my first book and English isn't my first language: I know it won't be perfect, so any constructive criticism would be appreciated.

-first-person, portal fantasy, litrpg

-the cover is my crude attempt using Paint

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Frank D. Goods

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 446
Views: 370,503

Chapters(133 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

DBoyBluesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Slow start, kinda crap at first, but it quickly grew in more me. Has some great vibes like a certain dungeon named Delta, if you understand that, good on you. Anyway. Yeah I love it and look forward to the next release. Don't you put this on hiatus author, you hear me.
ShadowKnight6992Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The novel is amazing, the storytelling, skills, and traits layout are really good, easy to understand but the main character is REALLY unlikable he is an ass, even when he meets knew people and has no reason to be one. But everything except the MC is perfect I give four out of five but if he gets better 5/5
like I understand how he was traumatized because literally 95% of everything he knew disappeared so I get the first days In the church. But he can't read his own skills properly or understand what he can do, as an example he is like a caveman that uses a antimatter bomb as a club and try's to beat people with it.
Maefly61Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The writing has been pretty good and the books premise isn’t that bad either, however the internal dialogue with the mc’s personal system really needs some work. It completely draws you out of the story and is frankly too immature to find that witty/serious dialogue I think the author is looking for. Can’t help it but I just don't think the MC is likable, he’s pretty rude and obnoxious, like a middle school teenager with no filter. I think I’m being generous with 3.5 but might come back later and read some more, made it through 35 chapters.
JaimiRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I'm having a hard time liking the main character. He has major short man syndrome, He's a complete ass, and he is his own worst enemy. If that's what you were going for, you succeeded. Will he Improve? I'll keep reading and see. Grammar is good, and flow is OK. 3 out of 5 stars.