(The)Ypsilön

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Description

THIS WORK IS IN REVISION AND THE STORY ITSELF MIGHT DRASTICALLY CHANGE.

Our Governor awaits

The Sixth planet is dying. The rules have changed. Surviving remains a necessity but the cost has evolved. Nolis knows it all too well.

Will his last mission really be the end of his suffering? Or will it only open a whole new set of troubles? When only Chaos thrives, what good can prevail? Maybe his future will tell.

Kei Sertat Raegraen.

Little warning; English is my second language and the one I want to write in. I'm getting better everyday but would still want to apologize for the mistakes. Don't hesitate telling me if you come across one. Thank you!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2025
Author
RGrey

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSCI-FIROMANCE SUBPLOTMALE LEADURBAN FANTASYPROGRESSIONDYSTOPIAFIRST CONTACT

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Rating
4.7/ 5.0
Followers
6
Views
201

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Century boyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Style:
    A lot of time is dedicated to describing the feelings and thoughts of the main character, as well the environment and characters. The author creates vivid post apocalyptic environment with a distinctive ambiance reminiscent of mad max and other similar fictions.
    Story:
    the story takes its time to set up the world and main character. the pacing is on the slower side with the first few chapters setting up the characters and key plot points. Not much has happened as of yet but I’m interested in seeing where this goes.
    Grammar:
    there are a few sentence that could be re written to be more fluid, but aside from that it’s perfect.
    Character:
    The characters are well introduced with the main protagonist being given a lot of depth right from the start through his complex relationship with his father figure. His relationships with the shadow is also quite interesting and has the potential to present readers with interesting dynamics in the future.
    The pacing is quite slow and there’s a very limited amount of chapters available so there really isn’t much more to say. The world is interesting with the characters introduced so far being very well handled. I wish the author good luck with their future endeavours.