The world traveler

Self-Published

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Description

A child with mysterious origin travel between the various worlds as he grow and gain experience, at the same time making various friends, rivals, enemies and stealing the hearts of many beauties, as he slowly tries to unravel his origins .

**Author's note**

This is a story that I'm writing at my free time, don't expect frequent chapters. At most once or twice a week .Prologue about 10 chapter before going to his first world .I'm still not sure which one should be his first world .Probably naruto , other worlds I'm still deciding .Feel free to post critism or reviews, along the way . And BTW english is my second language so I'll probably f*ck the grammar quite often so feel free to correct me .And thanks, hope I would continue writing .

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Yamir

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 16
Views: 7,742

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

John FighterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
As of writing this review, there are currently three released chapters (including the prologue). The prologue seems to take place further along in the story, with the following chapters being a flashback. I liked the prologue, as it gives us an idea of where the story is eventually going to go, with the possibility of things continuing even after that point is passed in the following chapters. I like the writer's use of humour. I think the character interactions that have been shown so far were believable, and I look forward to seeing more of them. Rainbows are pretty cool, also, it's good to have a good boy. The grammar could use a little work, with certain words being where they shouldn't be (sounds like my writing sometimes haha), but I was able to get the idea of what the author was trying to say. Keep up the good work Reluctant_Bear :)
Spoiler: Spoiler
Not sure if this is even a spoiler, but the first chapter is the normal world we're all familiar with (or so I think). The main character Seth gets summoned to another world in the second chapter. He ends up in a forest. It's like starting a new Minecraft world, except you don't know how to craft most things.
Also, this is probably my first review of a book.
Lord MonarchRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Sadly, eventhough reading it fun and all. There are a few big inconsistencies. One is that he says he hasn't been trained in survival skill but he can somehow build bags, spears, campfires and START a fire with 'no trainig' with his 10 y/o hands hurting.