The World of Alaris: The Chronicles of Darkness

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Fifteen years ago the Kingdom of Livnar was overthrown by a coven of vampires that lied in waiting and plotted for years before making their move and claiming their prize. The world was shocked, as in a single bloody night the ruling nobles of the kingdom were either killed, fled, or aided in the vampiric coup. As such, the Sanguinium was formed. To south the Kingdom of Dragons--Draconia did little, and even begrudgingly accepting the new vampire Kingdom. To the east, the Yfanorisian Republic eagerly opened trade with the newly formed kingdom eager to monopolize trade rights within the land. However, to the east, the Empire of Nimastar refused to acknowledge the fledgling kingdom.An unsteady peace has hovered over the land for the past fifteen years--but in the shadows, there are forces at work to stoke the flames of hatred and disdain between the Empire, and Vampiric kingdom. Tyrius and Leanna Elmount, a pair of orphans living in the southwestern part of the empire are caught in the middle of the plot to stoke the flames of war--and are forced to flee east for fear of their lives.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Gfellha

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Rating: 5.0/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 2,457

Chapters(11 total)

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KeywielderRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Only a few chapters in but the beginning has been great and if it's any indication of the future chapters this story will be an amazing one! The characters are already relatively fleshed out and I'm only 5 chapters in, they have their own unique personalities and seem like they will continue to grow and change throughout the story. The grammar and sentence structure are good, everything flows pretty well and I haven't seen any sloppy transitions or anything like that so far. There are a few typos but nothing insane, have only noticed 2 in the 6 chapters I've read. The story line is great so far, you get a good base of what's going on in the world in the prolog and then focus in on the main characters of our story in the chapters following and what thrusts the characters into the wider world falls into place with what's already been established. Looking forward to see how everything plays out, there's obviously a lot I don't know yet but there is a great base for the future in the story. They style is smooth as well, the paragraphs are broken up enough so they flow well and each chapter is structured with a good sequence of events in mind! Overall I'm definitely looking forward to more, also love the magic system introduced so far, and enjoyed the idea about the flint boots for the fire magic! Great job author keep it up!